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2020-04-15 Joined United States

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I'm not very good at this so please bear with me, overall the quality is very good, and there's very few mistakes, to the point where I don't even notice it for the most part, as I've been away I can't say anything about update stability but I'm pretty sure it's pretty consistent, the flow is slow but steady, and in my own opinion that's a good thing, the author is very good at getting the reader into the mindset of the character (as stupid as they are sometimes) and I enjoy it more because of that... now, for the things that could use some improvement: first up being that I can see the huge amount of a/n's driving coin cost up pretty high, a way to fix that I think would be to move them to the author's note section, the only other thing I can think of is that occasionally in my experience it turns into a 3 or more chapter reading slog for something that could have been done in one chapter with the same - if not better - results, however this could also just be my own opinion showing through, anyway, that's - oh right! almost forgot about background stuff lol, he does a pretty good job of teaching the reader as he does the mc, most of the time pretty simply, even if a bit lengthily, alright that's all from me, keep up the good work author, and here's hoping that everyone has a good rest of the year, that you stay safe, and stay awesome (last one is non negotiable), and to those that need it, you are loved and valued, even if it's some novel junkie on the internet, remember that
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