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Book&Literature · Jerry153
Hogwarts is in Scotland, not Ireland.
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HP: The Crazy One
Book&Literature · Ganoush
was laying to everybody --> lying :)
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Harry potter Once More
Book&Literature · mido_the_king
I don't get it. Wasn't it the whole point that wizards know about his name, so that he can make fun of them? Why fight for the name at all, if you are not going to use it.
After thinking about it a little he accepted. (Such a shame. All of those wasted puns. I want to cry.) He knew that he can avoid a lot of problems by doing this. (And here it is again choosing easy path as soon as i got the chance... But my main goal is still active.) Some of his plans changed at this very moment. Unknown to everybody this one decision changed the fate of a lot of people. "Thank you for your care prof. McGonagall, i accept." She almost jumped at this. They had little hope of him accepting.
Harry Potter: Woke up as a cat
Movies · marcelll3214
Before it was CP-16
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My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
,* where the shooting
After deboarding from the airport, Will found Jeffrey outside the airport, where he had rented a bus so that the whole crew could go together at once to the location where the shooting would take place - just outside a town called Burkittsville, formerly Blair.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
, and while he liked her a lot, he couldn't...* or , and even though he liked her a lot, he couldn't...*
Recently, she has been giving clear signals, and even he liked her a lot, but he can't just go ahead and get caught up in a relationship at such a crucial point in his career.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Will and gonna are 2 future tenses. In english, you can only use one. Going to (gonna) is the tense, I believe should be used.
Not a classic but something that will surely gonna give the viewers chills.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Well, I guess it's alright then. It's just that I've never done it, nor have I heard someone do it.
"Oh, it's fine if you're not free. Maybe another time. By the way, if you want to meet Uncle Charles, I could set up a meeting for you."
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Contact previously saved as ´Uncle Benjamin´.
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My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
I wouldn't use the word look twice in a sentence. Maybe use was instead of looked, or handsome instead of good looking.
He had a haircut, with his hair being quiff cut. He looked quite good looking because of his well-maintained body and fitting clothes.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Will and gonna, 2 future tenses. I would choose going to/gonna.
Not a classic but something that will surely gonna give the viewers chills.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
in front of her*
Benjamin wouldn't allow any random youngster in his office, so the man in front of him must have some talent.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Again, not sure, if calling an uncle by last name is a thing that is done.
"Oh, it's fine if you're not free. Maybe another time. By the way, if you want to meet Uncle Charles, I could set up a meeting for you."
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Shouldn't it be uncle Benjamin? Seems a bit wierd calling your uncle by his last name.
"Don't worry Uncle Charles, I'm not going to spend all the money I get from the script on a fool's errand. I would make sure to use it wisely. Just trust me on this one."
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
that were* going to release
After that, many studios were trying to emulate it's success and Benjamin was hearing a lot about new movies based on this concept that was going to release in the next one or two years.
My Hollywood System
Movies · DreamThree
Stolen. Original: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13556982/1/The-Age-of-Men The author said, he will start cross-posting on webnovel btw. .....