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1. In Naruto as a Weapon Shop Owner
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
its perfect 5 by me.
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Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
well buddy i would really recommend u start those side chps and shinden novels as it improves a persons understanding of even side characters. its 4.6 from me here. will give it more as i know u must have plans for side characters ahead then just not now. hope u dont feel bad.
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ill give a 5.0 as u are one of those authors who take the story to unexplored places of plot and its holes. eg the ruins of otutsukis and all
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authour get a charizard here. it will fun to watch urs against alains.
ch 993 Battle Chateau
Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
obvio he was wronged bro as thats the reason naruto helped tailbeasts
And in the Uchiha Clan, there shouldn't be anyone who has a Mangekyou Sharingan so he might have a chance to get out and enjoy his freedom.
Anime & Comics · Evil_Dragon
good job using gato for money.
ch 242 235. Monetary Problems
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thanks buddy and thanks for chp as well.
ch 240 233. End of Problem
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
buddy please make sure the side characters get some real development for example if madara dies in your story u can give his each rinnegan to itachi and shisui.or even let sage of six paths give it to them directly. as for in databooks its stated that itachi has large chakra but less reserves the problem can be done with sage mode as chakra mingles with nature to form greater chakra. he will be a beast also if u let him study fuinjutsu i have feeling that u know totsuka blade was extra addition according to orochimaru so itachi might know sealing jutsu just my opinion though. as for shisui is also a beast. and keep kakashi with dms and six paths as well. he will still be strong without the rinnegan.
ch 240 233. End of Problem
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
buddy please focus on side characters as well give them some unique technique like kishimoto did. for eg pass madara rinnegan to both itachi and shisui and let kakashi have his dms with thesix paths.
ch 237 230. Curse of Possession
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if koto is in the game then its bye bye minato.
ch 84 Sasuke vs Itachi pt2
Anime & Comics · KakuzuCantolopes
well thats the peoblem bro. the electro magnet rease is corroding his arm along with the chakra system.think if we were healing it then it will corrode again heal corrode. if we wanna stop it once and for all we need to do something else. As for killing the baby i guess he did it so izuna could have a deep hatred to otutsuki clan. As for the matter of fact i wont complain as the backstory to hate them was needed.And then about the nerf i mean there are a lot of things remaing for izuna.i mean the way he is strong now he can indees take on madara unless the six paths one. So author did a good job creating a scene where he has no nerf but still corrosion and needs to heal
ch 222 215. A Grave Loss
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
Naa mc cant heal constantly corroding damage or else he will be healing all his life as long as he has electromagnet release his chakra system kerps corroding
ch 221 214. Meeting with the Sage of Six Paths
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no actually suna attacked firat so this ais just a payback as for a matter no other villages will attack her becuse kirigakure is with konoho and if suna needs to survive they need to be with konoha as well. So no matter what other hidden village means kumogakure and hidden stone village do at the point they cant point a fault in it or fight three combined village together
"I can't even imagine the hell they will unleash on Sunagakure."
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yeah thst ok because jigen didnt stab her
ch 216 209. One-tails Shukaku
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his favourite character might be light yagami
ch 217 210. Price for Power
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hagormo
He opens his purple eyes with concentric rings and gazes towards Konoha.
Naruto: The Weapon Shop Owner
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