Badges 11
Moments 74
Get someone to fix your grammar after you've finished a chapter.
ch 0 9 Group?
An Ice Mage Who Hates The Cold
Games · CWabbitt
Is the author trying to get us to stop reading?
ch 239 The Uproar Before the Game (Part 3)
I Have A Game Clone
Games · This Fisherman
735
ch 0 4 Doomsday Roulette, Zombie Army
Worldwide Apocalypse: Starting With Max-Level Skills
Sci-fi · Startled Cicada
Narrative past tense: was about to change
Earth, a planet inhabited by an enormous number of living beings, of which the most spread out are us, the humans. People were walking around, going to their jobs, and just doing their everyday routine, fully unaware that everything is about to change...
Is this really a Game?!
Fantasy · TheReign
Flagrant*
"Damn this. I never felt pain like this in my previous life. Just what kind of missions am I coming across, for the human rights abuse to be so fragrant?" Jake wondered.
World Online
Games · jdbeue
never mind that / ignoring that*
He knew exactly how impossible it was to get to the tiers higher than the sixth tier. After the sixth tier, each tier ascension was impossibly difficult. And never minding that, getting to the next levels was also too difficult.
World Online
Games · jdbeue
Up to*
"Two thousand gold coins for the basic stables, that can handle unto ten tamed monsters."
World Online
Games · jdbeue
Its* possessive
The moment he touched one of them, he heard a roar. And this time, he knew that the roar was directed toward him. The Gojira was done fighting. The two dinosaurs were dead, and now, it saw that a pest was in front of it's eggs? It's children? That was simple unacceptable.
World Online
Games · jdbeue
Which sock? Why, the left one, of course.
"Patience, my boy. When we get there, you will thank yourself for letting me keep my mouth shut. The surprise, well the surprise will knock your sock off. But let me be very clear. It is going to be a leveling ground that is above our levels. It is for levels thirty and above, while you are in level twenty, and I am in level eleven. Make sure that you do not get hit by the monsters you see even once." Jake warned him.
World Online
Games · jdbeue
Lol
"Kurahhh!" It streeched, biting the air in front of it like a rapid dog, desperately wanting to quench on the human flesh.
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
Chinese math.
Yao Shier thought for a moment and said, "Make it three seats. I'm bringing my disciple."
After Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me Invincible
Urban · Traversing Nine Realms
People die when they are killed.
"Saving it might bring it back to life."
Fated Cultivation: I Have Max-Level Divination Skills
Eastern · Platonic Formula
Don't worry about the pronouns; the prepositions alone are a nightmare.
"R-right." Jesse grabbed the reins, thankful for her stepmother's kindness, and felt more confident after having an expert at horseback riding beside him.
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
A pp stabbed through his pp. Ouch.
At that moment, Karma let out a scream as an arrow stabbed through his arrow. He shrieked and stood up, then looked towards the archer. Nora, the leader of Stormdawn, calmly stood in the middle of crow corpses.
Martial Online.
Fantasy · Alekzi
Everything so far screams "Pinoy", "poverty" and "pathetic". Maybe tone that down in future and move away from Tagalog Engrish.
Arlan signed the document and handed it back to Trisha. He was shaking from excitement. Luckily, Trisha didn't notice his trembling hands or she would have thought differently of him.
I Can Claim Daily Rewards
Urban · Malignant
"A treasure?" Although curious, Jiang He understood that it was clearly Mohammad Xiao's secret.
"A treasure?" Although curious, Jiang He understood that it was clearly Mo Xiao's secret, and she shouldn't inquire further.
After Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me Invincible
Urban · Traversing Nine Realms
The author is sabotaging themself with bombastic dialogue at the expense of ACTUAL GRAMMAR. The characters are flat and uninteresting. The MC is blessed with godlike skills for no apparent reason. The list goes on ad nauseam. Basically, the premise showed potential, but the actual story needs a rework from the ground up.
ch 16 Hidden Quest
An Ice Mage Who Hates The Cold
Games · CWabbitt