How does someone mess up on the first paragraph of their story? You’d think they’d take better care when they’re just starting
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Games · Alekzi
Roman goddess of luck
Even if she felt weird, Fortuna had to be on her side, because Anna couldn't fathom how else she could have encountered Jason at such a time.
Urban · HideousGrain
Where are you from? Most third world countries are racist if not all
She had read about how humans in the past were powerless and only had weaponry. She wished the world could be like that again without discrimination, but... She didn't care anymore because her reason for caring was gone, so her hate was transferred to the mixedbloods who carried bloodlines.
Fantasy · TimVic
Definitely not, countries like India, Nigeria, Pakistan and Afghanistan are all extremely racist and some of the most racist countries on earth. Media likes to portray white people as the most racist due to the fact that they committed atrocities due to racism on a larger scale in the past since they were more technologically advanced. After all the UK was the first country to undergo its industrial revolution. The truth is Western Europe, especially to the north, is the least racist place in the world and has made the greatest strides in social reform.
She had read about how humans in the past were powerless and only had weaponry. She wished the world could be like that again without discrimination, but... She didn't care anymore because her reason for caring was gone, so her hate was transferred to the mixedbloods who carried bloodlines.
Fantasy · TimVic
This is a bit unrealistic, why is he so friendly with everyone? He has literally just been sold and been in unbearable agony
ch 10 The Soothing of A Friend
Fantasy · DelzGB
Ye Tian Yun shook his head, "Unfortunately, I can't see things from your viewpoint because I can't take my head so high up my ass."
Eastern · ZinonWonder
Why has the grammar suddenly devolved over the last few chapters?
ch 143 Other Survivors
Eastern · XiaoXiaoYi
The word dead is unnecessary here
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Urban · HideousGrain
NOT without justification
But that is without justifications!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Not as IF I care
Nothing? Okay then, do not give me anything, not as I care.
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
With > worth
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Fantasy · rRandom
Isn’t it 7 continents? North America, South America, Europe, Asia, Africa, Oceania and Antarctica
[The planet was known as earth. It was a mortal world of six continents under the supreme reign of the human emperor Zhu Tao. On one of the continents called Aksan, in the large village of Fountain-Spring, a girl was born. The few remaining members of the Dai clan rejoiced in the miracle since the parents of the child had long passed their prime to give birth and they couldn't afford a potent spirit pill.
Fantasy · Primate
Bruh
"They don't stink!" Yuthia brought her foot to her nose and took a sniff. Her nose suddenly wrinkled up. She made a strange face as she yelled out: "Why the hell do they stink!?"
Fantasy · invayne
The system didnt ask for quantity just different types
Eat 10 types of metals (1/10)
Fantasy · KangarooCruz
First of all, I realise that harem is one of the tags and I can’t really complain since I knew that going into this. I just wanted to read something, and I thought there was a chance it could’ve been the one in a million novel where a harem is actually done well. It’s not. I’m quite annoyed actually, it had so much potential. I can deal with harems where the women are actual individuals and provide something to the story, and there’s only 2-3 of them. This was not the case here, they completely lack any sense of personality. They’re just there to add to the grandeur of the mc, displaying how women just fall to there knees around him. It completely ruins the story. As well as this, all the characters lack any sort of depth. The interactions fail to portray any deeper emotions than surface level, it seems almost mechanic. Finally, I hate how saint-like the mc is. It’s just completely unrealistic, given how much had been taken away from him you’d expect him to carry some resentment. He never gets angry, he’s constantly fixed in an emotional state of sunshine and rainbows and it’s frankly boring. I realise you can’t expect too much from Webnovel for quality but I genuinely had high hopes for this one.
Cultivation Online
Games · MyLittleBrother