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This story is really catchy, the vocabulary is varied and makes the reader's progression alongside the lines really smooth. The narration doesn't have loopholes and the author is always here to clarify some questions that we may have. Really a nice book to read! Here is my honest review after I finished the 20 Chapters. Style: Overall the style is very good and makes you wanna complete it to the end. The way the author wrote the book is very nice and easy to catch with. Story: This story really grabbed me. I've found myself waiting for a new chapter so I can get a hit of that sweet, sweet face slapping dopamine that this story gives. The pacing feels really good as while there are technically "grindy" moments that occur in the story and does a great job of passing over them while still covering what occurred so those moments don't drag on. There's a good slow-drip of fun new abilities, items, spells, skills, etc etc that come into play at the MC progresses, so there's always something fun to think about by the end of a chapter. Grammar: Grammar is pretty good and understandable. overall it's very solid in terms of grammatical structure. Character: The main character, Tai Jin, has a mysterious character, and he lives up to that goal with his every action. He's a very fleshed out character where I can really understand and feel the devotion he has. He's a bit of a loner but that makes a lot of sense given who he is. Overall, a very well-thought-out character who feels very "real" in the world.

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