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MEGHAN_RICKETTS
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Good God! Sounds like my home town, minus the cool abandoned building.
ch 0 2 2. Dullsville
Toxic Vampire
Fantasy · TheStefanSalvatore
This is really hard for me to read. It stirs up emotions and pokes at sore spots not fully healed .
ch 0 1 Love is not dying.
Morphing Iniquity
Teen · Tailrs ink
I just read the first 3 chapters (and am part of the way through the fourth), the emotions I can relate to this novel! The betrayal is something you can almost physically feel yourself. Well done!
ch 0 4 Chapter-4 ~False confessions aren't a game
NO ONE BELIEVED ME. IF YOU SAY YOU BELIEVE ME NOW, IT'S TOO LATE.
Teen · Mr_BLack
I am intrigued about what will happen. Your writing makes me feel empathy for the main character. It reminds me of the old saying 'being in the wrong place at the wrong time'. (describing an unavoidable run of bad luck). I hope the character's luck has a turn for the better.
ch 0 1 On the side of the road to regret everything that has happened
BitLove
Urban · GenXPrays
I love the idea of having an informative section before the story begins, to give readers an overview and some background information. It prevents the reader from stuggling with concepts later on when reading.
ch 0 -1 Story Notes 1. Scenarios. Main characters. The plot.
White Sea School (WSS)
Fantasy · GenXPrays
ok...I love the fact that the enemies of the Prays are like a double edged sword. Giving them very negative purposes (or characteristics) as well as very positive purposes (or characteristics), creates two things here. 1, it gives the types of enemies more depth and 2 displays the enormity of how important the Prays are.
ch 0 3 The types of enemies of the Prays.
Prays X Human 1
War · GenXPrays
I would change 'degenerative genetic alteration' to "degenerative genetic breakdown" or "degenerative genetic damage". The first sounds (to me ) like the DNA of cells is mutating/ evolving, while the second two imply more the idea of destruction or disease of the cells.
ch 0 2 They capture everyone, they consume the fruits
Prays X Human 1
War · GenXPrays
My way is yoga, meditation and a love of different foods from around the globe.
ch 0 2 They capture everyone, they consume the fruits
Prays X Human 1
War · GenXPrays
The first chapter has good potential. I like the plot so far. The author could improve the work further by learning more about grammer rules and making it clearer when it is Aurora thinking or speaking ( vs. when it is Lana thinking or speaking). Good luck, author!
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Mafia queen beats the Boss
Urban · Austin_Ik
They seem like a race that would enjoy the slow-paced life of peace, but are destined not to have it. I like the set up for a race perfectly capable of kicking butt when the occasion calls for it in a cool, calculated manner!
ch 0 1 Prays kingdom third season
Prays X Human 1
War · GenXPrays
Yes. I have not officially in my written chapters said the location is Canada, but I am working it into chapter 9
"My name is Sam." I said with a half smile on my lips. My reflection in the mirror gave me no reply. I sighed. If only being confident, outgoing, and extroverted had come easily to me, then I would not be in this situation. I only hoped that today goes better than yesterday did. I felt butterflies of worry dance in my stomach. Yesterday was my first day of school, at a new high school, where I knew no one. I recalled that the day was sort of ok, until lunch period. I entered the cafeteria and instantly felt overwhelmed. It was crowded with students, both human and werewolf. It was loud too; perhaps people were excited to see each other again after summer break. One wall of the cafeteria was made up of floor to ceiling glass windows. It looked out to the grass, trees and occasional dandelions that surrounded most of the school (from my limited knowledge). The sun came through the wall of windows at this time of day, in a very unfortunate way. It made the cafeteria, which was already warm with the heat of all those warm-blooded bodies, even more heated. Because of the amount of people, the noise level and the heat, I felt my body start to sweat. The overwhelmed feeling from earlier morphed into a general anxiety. There was no where I could just sit and be by myself, I noticed. There was not room for that, and there was no way I would just go up to a group of strange teens and ask to sit with them, just so I could have a place to sit here. Somebody entering the cafeteria from the double doors behind me bumped into my shoulder as they tried to get between me and a mob of students going in the opposite direction. That was the last straw. I quickly turned and left the cafeteria the way I had come. But I was so preoccupied with my own internal world still, that I was not paying full attention to my surroundings. I almost smacked, headlong into a tall young man. The next second, I realized that he was a werewolf. I could tell because he had a different smell from humans. My whole body stiffened as I feared what his reaction would be...
Metamorphosis: A cocoon of secrets
LGBT+ · MEGHAN_RICKETTS
This chapter has a very intriguing plot. Not to mention I love the art on the book cover. The chapter ignites in the reader the need to read more. I want to know what happens next!
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Mafia queen beats the Boss
Urban · Austin_Ik
Author , you should probably remove the one part of the chapter that was repeated.
ch 0 4 4. Sixteenth Birthday
Toxic Vampire
Fantasy · TheStefanSalvatore