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can you use POV? ok I understand if this writing style is taken from the point of view of mc or POV1 person. but you mix pov1 with narrator's POV without switching between POV 1 with narrator's POV. it's very annoying. please be more consistent. if this story only focuses on POV 1 there is no fun. to be honest in my opinion. because each storyline only focuses on what MC is living. just monotonous. I prefer narrator's POV, because in this writing style, you can tell or take a different angle, POV 1 only tells what is felt, experienced, carried out and seen. Moreover, this fanfic should be wider and not obstructed because it focuses on the MC. some original characters must also be included so that the story is better than just from the point of view of mc. thanks

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fucking awesome dude 😁👍 i want more 😭🙏 . 😁

MC USELESS STUPID.In this fanfic genre, it is listed as "anti-hero" but always helping people. example of raising the dead and moreover it has nothing to do with MC. just because he has strength but is arrogant. especially the arrogant fool! for example, two meetings with X-Men MC were provoked by Logan and Beast. but the MC only replied with his big mouth, you idiot! should give lessons so that people feel respect the efforts made by MC. but the stupid MC is just as silent as a rock!behavior that is childish. so underestimated. MC is weak and stupid. okay I understand that there is a comedy element but can the MC not look ridiculous? Every chapter I read you always make unnecessary jokes. MC is just big mouthed!any confrontation in every chapter is just unnecessary nonsense. no real action. just real bullshit. so I dropped this novel because it was hard to read for me. thanks