Webnovel Author: JamieMcGregor

1yr

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The phrase “On careful look” is understandable but isn’t correct grammatically. If the translator reads this: next time use, either: “on a more careful look”, “upon a closer look”, “upon looking carefully”, or a comon English phrase meaning the same thing: “on second glance”.

Although it was taller than many skyscrapers and had a diameter of dozens of meters, on careful look, one would realize that it wasn't a building. It was more like an energy transmission device.

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Urban · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

JamieMcGregor

1yr

Commented

Does anybody know who Shiva is?

''Who are you?'' Beelzebub asked rudely. This was the man who stopped him from killing Miyamoto instantly, and had to suffer some damage. He was also the one who saved Zeus' life just now.