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This Author is a terrible writer, he can't even write a complete thought. Over-reliance on Cliffhangers is not a skill. It shows a lack of skill. This 2/3 of a "chapter" has finally pushed me too my apathetic break point. So I'm dropping this disappointment of a story.
ch 220 Harry's Misunderstanding, Fake Moody's Attack On Draco
The Strongest Dark Lord
Movies · Mysteryon
So if she was a normal vampire. she would predate human migration to North America (16,000 to 13,000 years ago) and predate writing by 11,000 years. She would predate Mesopotamian civilization ( one of the first permanent settlements) by ~9,000 years.
[Age Absorbed - 15,928]
Unique Gamers Travels
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
Well, it's still simple. Kill his power or his death requirement then him. unless you mean that the joker's supposed power is so strong it can't be killed by the literally embodiment of death itself who can casually kill Universe Concepts.
The bad 'press' had even spread to Ivy's Ivy. The girls (and Freeze) had been forced to close early tonight. The Joker's reputation was just that fearsome. The normal folk who visited my bar heeded it for obvious reasons. But even my regulars — confident in my ability to enforce the bar's neutrality — weren't willing to risk getting caught in the crossfire. Not when it came to the Joker.
Gotham's Dead End Bar
Anime & Comics · Daddy
Ok, I truly don't mean this personally and I appreciate that you engaged with my post but, that was in my opinion, a very stupid statement. Comparing a mass murderer, insane, mind controlling scum to a child is plan baffling. As to changing the DC story. He already has, and the only thing he will change by killing the joker is the death of Lois so Superman won't just start killing people. That sounds like a good change. What else would change if the MC killed the joker?
The bad 'press' had even spread to Ivy's Ivy. The girls (and Freeze) had been forced to close early tonight. The Joker's reputation was just that fearsome. The normal folk who visited my bar heeded it for obvious reasons. But even my regulars — confident in my ability to enforce the bar's neutrality — weren't willing to risk getting caught in the crossfire. Not when it came to the Joker.
Gotham's Dead End Bar
Anime & Comics · Daddy
Why can't he just kill the joker? He can kill the concept of space but not a single human who is insane? if this is his supposed retirement why would he allow someone to ruin his retirement? MC can just kill him and then go back to retirement.
The bad 'press' had even spread to Ivy's Ivy. The girls (and Freeze) had been forced to close early tonight. The Joker's reputation was just that fearsome. The normal folk who visited my bar heeded it for obvious reasons. But even my regulars — confident in my ability to enforce the bar's neutrality — weren't willing to risk getting caught in the crossfire. Not when it came to the Joker.
Gotham's Dead End Bar
Anime & Comics · Daddy
But a clown without humor is a joke within itself.
Nice guy, now that he wasn't plastered in clown makeup and cackling maniacally. Went by Joey. Having a name that started with 'J' in Gotham was a death sentence but he'd overcome the Joker's insidious recruiting methods with my 'fatal' assistance. Even the Joker didn't have use for a clown without humor.
Gotham's Dead End Bar
Anime & Comics · Daddy
No, instead of the last four paragraphs being about going back to the courthouse it should have been him going back to his hotel. for a more concise ending to a chapter not a start to something that should be in next chapter.
And Fleur Delacour has a quarter of Veela blood, or that's what the cover says to reduce discrimination, because all female Veela children are full Veelas.
The Strongest Dark Lord
Movies · Mysteryon
This needs to stop author. Constantly making Cliffhangers to entice readers to come back to read is a terrible strategy. Overusing Cliffhangers makes it seem that your work is constantly unfinished. This chapter should have ended in his hotel room not back at Court.
And Fleur Delacour has a quarter of Veela blood, or that's what the cover says to reduce discrimination, because all female Veela children are full Veelas.
The Strongest Dark Lord
Movies · Mysteryon
Am I the only one that vehemently dislike Cliffhangers? I do understand that as a writing tactic. Cliffhangers incentivize the audience to return to see how the characters resolve the dilemma. Though I believe that it has been seriously overused, to the point where four stories that I'm am reading, all ended on a cliffhanger today and it makes me feel that the stories are incomplete. As if the author gave us half chapters. Angry moment aside I do enjoy this author's work. (Please do less cliffhangers.)🙏
He probably didn't expect that either.
The Strongest Dark Lord
Movies · Mysteryon
Ok this is a good Idea that completely slipped my mind.
He seems sane for the most part. So there has to be a way for him to stay young like this. I wonder what though.
Different Batman
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
Look here dear author, I was just confused. We have a MC that is suppose to have the highest IQ ever. One who never forgets. How, earlier in the story knows the location of two good martial artists in America and in Brazil. Ones that I have never heard of. So it's just baffling how the MC forgot about the Lazarus Pit.
He seems sane for the most part. So there has to be a way for him to stay young like this. I wonder what though.
Different Batman
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
I thought he kept his memories? His meta knowledge? How does he not know about the Lazarus Pit? It is one of Batman's best known things.
He seems sane for the most part. So there has to be a way for him to stay young like this. I wonder what though.
Different Batman
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
No I don't like her either, that and the mc shouldn't take all the women.
I honestly don't like Aslaug as a character or a person and I'm considering not taking her as a Wife in this story.
Evil Degenerate Reborn In Vikings
TV · SERBMADHAUS
![Cliffhanger Extravaganza]! 97% cliffhangers I started reading this when there was only ~30 chapters and it has been cliffhanger after cliffhanger. The writing is good but every chapter feels like "NEXT TIME on Dragon Ball Z" it's to the point where I can't even read it anymore. I hate feeling disappointment after reading; it ruins my mood. (If this review is removed I will post again and again. saved it on Google docs and i will put a counter on how many times I have to repost it)
The Strongest Dark Lord
Movies · Mysteryon