Badges 7
Moments 15
Did the author get this from the movie Madagascar? Too funny.
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Spirit Cultivation
Eastern · Piokilek
It's racist to assume it has anything to do with race. Black is what it is when it's dark. You know, night, shadows, places for evil to hide and sneak up on you. White is representative of light. You know, day, when you can see around you. Maybe you should open your eyes and look at a mirror if you're seeing racism everywhere.
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Spirit Cultivation
Eastern · Piokilek
two pages back it says "forest of trees at LEAST 100 feet"... how did they all shrink so fast?
Everywhere he looked, there were large trees, around 50 feet, and the annoying buzzing of insects.
Isekai Slave Master
Fantasy · ComputerGeek
Even with the errors, I'm really enjoying the book. ;)
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Lust Knight
Fantasy · LamenThief
"did not know"? When the incident was described earlier, that Knight was "her most loyal" retainer...
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Lust Knight
Fantasy · LamenThief
That's what she said...
Hmm… it looks bigger than before. Nice.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
"plot"... is that what we're calling her holes now?
It's such a small yet such a shitty plot. And that too, with a lot of plot holes as well.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
nope, he said in the last chapter that he told her his correct name. (couldn't have her calling him Paul on the TV).
"Jacob! What are you doing behind my back!?" she says in an unusually high pitched voice, turning really angry.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
No, because of magical enforcement of those customs and laws.
But that clearly impossi…ble…
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
Author inconsistency. Not the first time in this book.
A muffled grunt involuntarily leaks out of my mouth as I find my cock getting tightly wrapped within the warm and wet meat folds of Zakira's exquisite pussy.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
"Arya"? It was Aria before...
"Yes, Arya?" Miss Laura says.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
Wait a minute. She was on top, not him. How difficult is it to look at the last chapter to have some consistency?
"B-But he is on top of you!" She exclaims loudly.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
Nope, blackness or darkness is where evil hides (traditionally). Not the color black itself, the color is only a representation of darkness .
Spirit Cultivation
Eastern · Piokilek