What about Feifei's soul lantern? Is that just not a thing anymore?
ch 1479 Farewell, Luvile
Eastern · Suiyan
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 60 The Merchant [1]
Fantasy · Lasarus
Thanks for the chapter! The world seems mroe dangerous than I though
ch 57 The Long Road [2]
Fantasy · Lasarus
Just continue from here .no need to rewrite
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Fantasy · Lasarus
Bit over done with the fucks I think.
ch 42 The Search
Fantasy · Lasarus
Is he getting a pet/friend? Can portal monsters be tamed? Hmm, if yes he could get free durable clothes
ch 45 Chapter 45: Losing Hope
Fantasy · Romeru
Plausible
ch 44 Chapter 44: Jiggly Nope
Fantasy · Romeru
Were the others pulled in so fast it seemed like they disappeared?
ch 44 Chapter 44: Jiggly Nope
Fantasy · Romeru
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 33 Marketplace
Fantasy · Lasarus
Thanks for the chapter. There is some gibberish at the end.
ch 32 Haggar's Bar
Fantasy · Lasarus
Nothing stood out to me as retcon worthy. You can keep it as is. I just want more of the story
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Fantasy · Lasarus
1) By being born into the world naturally you mean no isekai knowledge or plain reincarnation? I am fine with how it was handled in this version, and I would like to see him weave himself into the world, not be born into it and be slapped with a family problems. 2) The suicide attempt was handled beatifully and unless it happends like every other chapter it will be fine as is. 3) As others have said, I prefer story with ***, not the other way around. 4) What do I know? Mike? Mathew? George? 5) Keep him as is. Kind, decently confident and not a fidgety teenager, capable of solving things.
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Fantasy · Lasarus
Should probably add Villain MC into the tags. Good chapter otherwise.
ch 18 Chapter 18: Coming Together
Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck