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Just continue from here .no need to rewrite

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ch 44 Chapter 44: Jiggly Nope

My Hermes System

My Hermes System

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Nothing stood out to me as retcon worthy. You can keep it as is. I just want more of the story

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1) By being born into the world naturally you mean no isekai knowledge or plain reincarnation? I am fine with how it was handled in this version, and I would like to see him weave himself into the world, not be born into it and be slapped with a family problems. 2) The suicide attempt was handled beatifully and unless it happends like every other chapter it will be fine as is. 3) As others have said, I prefer story with ***, not the other way around. 4) What do I know? Mike? Mathew? George? 5) Keep him as is. Kind, decently confident and not a fidgety teenager, capable of solving things.

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