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Thank you author for going at a great pace. Love this story

Thank you author that this story is going much faster than previously and still in your great writing style. Please continue your writing for us hooked readers.

What. No. What about all the ugly bad relatives What happened to them

Thank you author for coming back and giving us more chapters. Love this story

Still no updates. Don’ forget to give a thumbs up to comments so we can get points

People please don’ forget to give a thumbs up to comments

Still waiting for next chapters. What happened to author

How many weeks did it take for us to get here

Another side tracking situation. 1. WhaT has happened to ugly cousin and kidnappers and her parents 2 What about twins both being recognized by their father 3 Marriage of yl and cw 4 Dr at hospital which i dont know if good or bad 5 Those two terrible conniving eVil sisters 6 Women from restaurant 7 What really happened to her mother and who is her father Every chapter just gets tidbits because every paRagrapH is rewritten from the previous Sorry plot is great but taking forever to get anywhere

Omg this meeting of hIs children is taking forever .

Again, now the other twin is ignored.when will daddy dearest know his twins.please author you ate stretching this out a ridiculous amount.

Seven more hours till next chapter. I want more

I dont understand that last paragraph .

Another drama . twins have no father. The two g sisters r in trouble for causing the drama with stolen Jewelry . jb has in on cw mom. cousin Cn is still in hospital due to her being kidnapped and attack and her mother in jail? Wow we’ve been sidetracked alot

1 hour 59 mins Ugh I hate waiting for the next chapter

Another plot twist, havent finished with the twins or those two thieving sisters, evil cousin and her parents, and noAybe her daddy or maybe not, so maybe no marriage certificates. Wow, So many things going on.

Omg its gonna take at leAst 5 chapters for something to happen again

In the end those two evil people did this but to their evil daughter

Everything takes forever to happen

Every paragraph in every chapter repeats itself Looking forward to reading but getting disappointed with so much repeating