this story is one of my favorite stories i hope it keeps being updated as the story of is very good and i love the idea of the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Movies · BarCalak
I think the story is good but the only thing that bothers me is the MC I think he is very bad playing basketball honestly I don't feel like reading this story
Sports · Ade_Uyee
I think the story more or less I don't think it's bad but I don't think it's good either😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Anime & Comics · Prognastat
The original story already had a bad protagonist but this story manages to make it worse by making [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Video Games · Niggross
So far the story is very good and very well written not to mention that it is the first good eleceed fanfiction that I see I hope the story continues to be updated
Anime & Comics · Noname00
finally an eleceed fanfiction waited for you to keep updating the story so far the story is good
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thanks for the chapter
Anime & Comics · DavidBr
the story started out good but there are many things that I didn't like as an MC to be able to fight the Phoenix being it was already showing that even with his power the MC still has a limit since he lost for x-23 not to mention that he loses an arm and totally unnecessary and meaningless besides that the whole fight with the X-Men had no reason the MC just needed to leave but even with all that I still I decided to give the story a chance but seeing the last chapters I have but no interest in reading this story and a pity as I thought the story idea was very good
Movies · Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Good story 1001100101010100101020292929292929102020299#922902029202020192919220202020101010101020292929292929292929292938388383737$6_6_6$6$6$6$73737$7$7
Fantasy · Arthrall
I just don't like the story Bcbcbxbcbcbcbbcnxnxnxnznxnbxbdnxndndndndbdndbfbcncbfbcbcbfncnxnxnxnxncncncncnncncncncncncncncncncncncncncncncnfnfjfjfjfjfjfjdjdjfjfjfjjd
Book&Literature · Mettid
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
this story is one of my favorite stories i hope it keeps being updated as the story of is very good and i love the idea of the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Movies · BarCalak