Webnovel Author: Braderzsz - Novel Collection

I understand where you are coming from and I do need to work on it. I guess I look at trying to make the fight more eventful, rather than, her being stronger means she easily takes people down, and things end quickly and easily (not that that is what you are saying either). In this instance, all I can say is that she only had a couple of days worth of training, which she hasn't had the time to constantly repeat and drill the things she learnt into her head. Additionally, her tail is still reforming, so it's not at its peak which hinders her a little as well and given the size of the room they are in, the Poleaxe just isn't feasible as a weapon to use. If she tries to swing it she's going to get it lodged into a beam or a barrel or something. Then there is the hulking beast of a man she is against. But, I understand your point, I shall have to think harder in regards to the next fight scene.

For the time being at least. So far she has just been going with the flow, giving into the experiences that Lyrika has provided her. There is also the Orc and Goblin urge that is growing in her that's going to cause her to remain a little cautious as well. But, I'm sure it won't be long before the urge grows strong enough and she has the chance to truly go for it with one of the girls. It's possible it would have happened with Lyrika if they hadn't been stopped.

Well, I think it's a culmination of all that she has learnt that caused her to go for it. It's not just the words of one man, a series of events and information she has learnt. Besides, she should be more than capable of handling herself should trouble occur, being a Mercenary and all.

She still has it, she just doesn’t know how to use it to get in contact with Prisma.

Thanks for your thoughts. Yeah it shouldn’t be too long before they actually meet with them being after her. How they meet I’m still figuring out, but it is sure to be exciting.

That is very likely. And with the group after Olivia, it might not be long before they meet.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. We should learn a little more on Milly soon, but it may be some time before the whole mystery is solved.

We shall have to wait and see.

I think I was going for it to be a slip of the tongue. She had been feeling odd since the message from Ameril, and has probably been trying to figure out her feelings since. I might put in an interlude at some point on her view point during this time and the training.

Thanks, that’s nice to hear. I always worry about how the chapters and overall story is being recieved.