I completely disagree with Dragon, keep up the good work
I know that most of the main line is on Ezra's hit list already. but I think Fredrick just bumped himself closer to the top. congratulations 🎉
the skill book they sold was probably mid tier and they could have gotten much more for it. hard lessons to learn when no one will help them. humanity may hold a grudge.
damn, what an exciting couple of chapters
Amazing job on this book, the diversity of the story, the world building, character development and the flow is amazing. keep up the great work
plus it fits being a villain.
okay... you will have to provide a little detail. how old was Erza when the trial of steel started... was he 12? second trial (chapter 10)" snow everywhere freezing water" so I. a reader would assume that is prior to April? since then months and months, definitely over a year has passed. so if he is a month from 14. that would make sense if he started at 12. but there was no mention of "i guess I turned 13 during such and such trial" or things like that.
"I'm thirteen."
Last Gun Alchemist
Fantasy · JOE_JOE_Z
hahaha he gets the point but Jake gets the blame. *cough* rewards... how very villainous. hahaha
"Jake, well done on killing the culprit responsible for this tragedy at Moonrock Town." Ray cleared his throat and praised Jake loudly.
Villain Extra: Rogue Reader
Fantasy · Idczhen
so John just needs to work to survive, and all the game time is for extra money and pay to win. he's lucky.
Game of the Universe: Zenith
Fantasy · ZeusTheOlympian