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What's going on? You should keep writing, you've got people rooting for you mate.
ch 31 Wrath of the Storm God and the Nature Goddess
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The fight scene in this chapter was much easier to imagine
ch 22 More Goblins (2)
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Remember his stealth skill
He slowly opened the door and was about to look inside, but he heard a noise that he would later recognize as the singular noise that changed his life forever...
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Fantasy · Ramirys
I do like how you're partially implying, at least with the title, that their relationship is somewhat affected by their divinities
ch 23 Ouranos and Gaea Reincarnation
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He probably could have used his Mana sense to find her
After a minute of not being able to find her he started worrying.
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I feel ambivalent, it was probably pretty good, but it's hard to imagine
ch 21 More Goblins (1)
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He probably could have used his air
Ky just had to jump and reach up to grab onto the first branch.
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Fantasy · Ramirys
What is WSA?
ch 24 *IMPORTANT PLEASE READ*
Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
Fantasy · Ramirys
Could you share it with me on Google Docs?
ch 24 *IMPORTANT PLEASE READ*
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Fantasy · Ramirys
Odin?
Before you read this chapter, try to guess who "Sky Daddy" is just based off of the chapter name and the foreshadowing. I would like to see your guesses lol.
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Fantasy · Ramirys
I like your writing. If you would like a proofreader and wouldn't mind a bit of a delay, I'll volunteer.
ch 24 *IMPORTANT PLEASE READ*
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Fantasy · Ramirys
And put DareBee training in instead Though I guess it would be "Daring Bee"
"Yeah, they really should take that out." Sarah agreed.
Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
Fantasy · Ramirys
Maybe draw a general map, it's kinda hard to envision
The humans occupied the largest space in the middle of the continent that stretched from north the south.
Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment
Fantasy · Ramirys
I need to remember this stuff for starting to work out more seriously.
"After those few weeks of meaningless training, they give them real routines. The One Slap Man training is extremely inefficient for the body. You do not workout your muscles enough to combat the long running session. By the time you're done running you have burned off the efforts of the previous strength training."
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I really like this
So, sadly for the two boys there was no clear winner, except for the God of Bruises.
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Pluto inheritor?
"I'm not an edgelord… Anyway, the graveyard was filled with super dark smoke, it was really weird. I expected zombies to start crawling out of the ground or something but luckily, they didn't. Oh, and there were diamonds, sapphires, and rubies hidden in the dirt everywhere."
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Fantasy · Ramirys
Why do you keep doing this to me?
ch 32 This Novel Is Currently On Pause
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