I hope elly gets a upgrade soon. she is pretty worthless other than cooking.
ch 75 The Forbidden Library [2]
Fantasy · Endratox
first thing, great story and writing so far. so close range style archer sounds cool on the surface but is totally illogical. example as will be able to block a melee weapon with a bow, that's kinda sad if so. maybe he becomes the greatest player and can dodge/avoid every attack ever, also sounds kinda sad. logical time it would take to draw and aim for a bow, a sword would have already cut him in half. maybe he is that great but that just means every melee player just sucks that much more which is kinda sad. I have lots of questions but was gonna hold off till I see how you wrote it out and hoped it wasn't whack. I like the uniqueness of the story, most mcs in stories use swords or magic so this is a freshness to things.
ch 0 6 Leveling Up (3)
Games · HomieLv1
this close range archer style has me worried.
ch 0 6 Leveling Up (3)
Games · HomieLv1
the first line of the story has a misspelled word. I noticed atleast 3.
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Fantasy · Kirito_K5
yeah the mc is a crayon eater. honestly this chaptor was very hard to read. the system 100% right. he is stupid
ch 18 Choose a Zombie to be your Waifu!
Fantasy · Dummybeing
ohh are gonna get a hot werewolf babe Into the action?
ch 28 The Werewolves Are Coming
Fantasy · Debauchery_Scholar
the ultimate beta male has arrived
ch 25 Changing targets
Urban · DXHaseoXD
mc had a emotional addiction
is he stuck as a woman?
honestly so far it is a little confusing. he is comparing himself (who is level 15 I think) to the alpha team who are level 1. as far as stats go. he should be slightly stronger maybe, but he has way more skills. the way it's been written so far skills don't mean much in the way of fighting if your Stats are lacking. so for now he should be on par with alpha class but once they start to level he is basically done for. so unless he gets a better class or some divine thing happens he should go back to being the weakest link out of everyone.
ch 41 Rey’s Analysis
Fantasy · Magecrafter
I think your right, a teenager would have their hormones going all wacky. if he didn't think of any girls, it would be suspicious tbh
The moment Rey thought about the library, he remembered a face that made him smile a little.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
idk, but something has to happen. at how the author wrote this. no matter how many skills he has, he will get passed by everyone else with a class. like 100 plus s rank skills are worthless if there is no power behind them. if something doesn't happen for him to get a class or something the story is gonna get ridiculous
"It pains me to do this, but… we have no other choice." Grandmaster Conrad sighed.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
I was thinking so far maybe it will be kinda like shield hero anime. the dragons are not so bad and were done dirty by humans.
Rey felt a surge of irritation the more he heard Billy's words.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
honestly I would like it if those two became a thing. like the popular girl and the loser getting together, which dont happen in real life. I see your point of finding a local woman though, someone exotic maybe idk.
ch 28 There’s Something About Rey
Fantasy · Magecrafter
honestly I am happy about erix dying and starting over. his skills are so boring, I hope his necro skill thing goes poof as well. his skills and such are so confusing, he is melee and a rocket launcher gun thing. his skills just didnt mesh well at all together .rin and Bella are very nicely written though with nice skills.
ch 102 Descent Into Abyss
Fantasy · Eminent_Vellichor
I took it his mom died the day of testing and he couldn't focus on the test so he scored pourly
The Order to prepare did not surprise Eneas, it was a matter of class. Those who did not measure up to pass the exam of the officer academy of the Intergalactic forces could only opt for that, to be cannon fodder for the forces of defense... if only his mother had not died that day, he would have had his head focused for the exam, but there was no point in regretting it now; he was a soldier, and he knew what his duty was.
Eneas Fate
Fantasy · Albinus_istamar