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I really enjoy this book. I will love it when Severus dances with Lily. Then have Harry's reaction to it.

Why don't you complete it before you post it . I'm tired of investing my time to novels not completed. Well I hope you continue I do enjoy this.

Get back to the story. I don't need all this technical information.

I've read this before but I like the little changes you did to the story. Keep more chapters coming this good

Chapters are to short.

I have to drop this I'm getting tired of the interaction between Lin Bai and his girlfriend. He is treating her like a child that can't be told anything. What the he'll is the big deal if she learns he is making money.

I would like Hermione to see what James Potter is really like and see he is not as good a person as she heard.

Where's the next chapter?