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My biggest issue with this story is how the author uses too much detail for every little thing. I don’t need to know how the desks are arranged in a room, I don’t need to know about the posters on the wall of a classroom, And I don’t need to know that the chairs in the classroom are comfortable, unless the character outright states it when he sits on it. There are more examples of this throughout the 11 chapters that I read.

The premise is pretty good, but the author quickly ruins it with forced romance between a character. The main character doesn’t even like not truly at least, and the fact that he blinds himself before he even has access to his system, which is essentially suicide in the world he is in. Just because he blinded himself, doesn’t mean he’d be free from his familys influence they would still have to castrate him if he even wanted to be free from them. He simply gets too strong entirely too fast. Him going from slightly emotional to emotionless to very emotional back to emotionless on the drop of a hat gets rather annoying. The romance makes no sense because he is like the worst possible partner you could think of he’s not emotionally available he doesn’t even act like he likes you the only thing he has going from is that he’s strong and somewhat attractive that’s not mentioning how the author doesn’t even show how the romance develops between his love interests and him. He outright kills the son of a demigod permanently as in soul death. He never actually faces consequences for his actions, the most he ever does is when he gets injured from attacking the Akatsuki.

Or hear me out on this you can just keep your disgusting opinions to yourself, it’s fine wanting to hate what you wanna hate, but don’t go ruining someone else’s day just because you can’t stand someone loving another person, and to that point, I wouldn’t mind him being homophobic if he kept it to himself and didn’t project like a little bitch.

Good if you can turn your brain off. And it goes too fast.