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I really like this idea.I also really hope that you don't dropp it.It is really hard to find interesting stories like this that aren't dropped.

I like the concept of the story,but I don't think the multiple points of view is a good thing.I think that if you want to get every ones fillings about what is happening in the story then do 3rd person point of view were you get every ones reactions.But then again I don't think having every single persons feelings is good maybe if you stuck to 1,2,or3 people's points of view that it will be better and then so often do a third person point of view and tell how everyone is feeling.

Emotional me 😭 so sad but then so happy hope this continues and don't worry it is really good so please please keep on continuing this story

love all of it.Just hope that it does not get dropped please.[img=faceslap]😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰😍🥰🥰

I am just completely in live with how the author writes the story.U love when the story line how it informs but does not bore while reading the story.

I really like how the author was able to include the mc in the original family without making seem forced into the story.I also like how the storyline develops I do think though you are making the mc weird when he keep trying to get stronger using the same spell and tactic .