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good first chap 👍

I love your style of writing author but I think I personally can't keep reading this book while your a very talented author I can't help but think that you messed up with your main character I get giving the main character flaws and even making them a little crazy or dumb because that's the fun part of creating characters but I think I can almost confidently say your main character out of every other character you made amazingly is just not worth it I personally don't care about his story anymore even if I got involved in the other characters but if the entire personality of the main character doesent have some huge change soon I don't think I can keep reading.

awwww

well she dosent skip leg day

good chapter I wonder what he is going to do this time!

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

i like the names for the snakes

good chapter cant wait to see whats going to happen whith the snakes

sand

good book

ha they thought that he couldent break out of the genjutsu

gottum

wolf wants hive mind dead simple

bro its strait up said whith gold and elsa sucking me dry im dead.

oh boy my man over here getting some cuchie

i dont know how your brain can think of stuf this good

they cactis they got water in um

neet