I love the interaction between then, but sometimes it feels weird, i don't know... each one of then always has something say, and i think this is a constant thru the whole novel, it doesn't feel natural to me.
"Maybe after you both geek out about the game she'll like you more." I say in a comforting voice, pity in my eyes and a pat on the shoulder.
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
??????
"Well, Master Potter there are numerous books being sold that feature you without your explicit permission, one series by a witch named J.K Rowling is so successful that it made millions in Galleon. There are also ads running that have your face, toys that in the likeness of you, your name being thrown around in countless products, numerous people impersonating, a whole chain that is about you, and that is only scratching the surface."
Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
haha, what word could i'v used in this case? my engrishu is really limited! maybe common people right?
There were some taboo dual cultivation arts that allowed the practitioner to raise their ethereal strength through sexual intercourse.
Eastern · Resurgent
must be that, bc does not make any sense in trying to recruit him...
Triton sighed, "According to what I have been told about him, no amount of Rank 7 Pills can be comparable to Damien. He is our only and final hope. Within two years, our fate will be decided. Even I don't know how Damien can change our fate in two years. But I have no choice but to believe that he can, no matter how hopeless it seems. Besides, he doesn't seem to be the kind of person who is fond of dirty schemes. I think that he can be trusted and is not the kind of person who would betray unless we are his enemies."
Eastern · Resurgent
Yeah, but he could have run even before Igor showed up, i know that you needed this to develop the history, but the MC seems so smart, probing, making schemes, planing what he's doing... but out of the blue he decides to attack some sect disciples like that woudn't bring him problems. But anyway, loving the novel, thanks and keep the good work!
ch 53 Any Last Words?
Eastern · Resurgent
wtf just happen on those past chapters? mc was looking so smart and mature until now... he could just run, because not even an earth grade could catch him right? this was really necessary? im hoping that the novel dont go down like this..
ch 53 Any Last Words?
Eastern · Resurgent
i think shouldn't be seen like that, i mean, if we compare with drugs, using to health related problems is ok, using for recreation isnt. and they dont seens to have an predominant religion, that i think would impose some ideals like "*** is only a mean for reproduction". in a dog eat dog world wheres having *** makes you stronger, only dumb ones wouldnt practice dual cultivation. maybe they would even make dual cultivation a secret, imagine all the plebs getting stronger without restriction.
There were some taboo dual cultivation arts that allowed the practitioner to raise their ethereal strength through sexual intercourse.
Eastern · Resurgent
maybe, but i think it's about war, remember those elves? they need stronger people, and need fast...
Realizing that, Emery quickly fell into deep thoughts, as he dwelt on the motives and plans behind the method used in selecting acolytes in the Magus Academy.
Fantasy · Avan
Wow, take it easy man, he's just a kid, not a super duper programmer..
He had a feeling that he was being watched but he couldn't pinpoint were the this cold gaze was coming from. Turning his head towards the rising sun he threw all useless thoughts that came into his mind and started riding his horse.
Fantasy · Archwriter
lame
"His spirit is decent. It should be enough to activate the Necromantic magic array. Once the gate to deathlands open, I shall inherit the legacy of the Undead King!"
Fantasy · Archwriter
Dropped at chap35. Nothing new for an HP fanfic, and there's no problem with that. The real issue is: - Short chapters - MC with no emotions - A strange concept of a 'villain' - The novel feels more like a summary The author has some good ideas, such as testing the plot. However, it's never developed further; it always feels like a summary.
Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
Movies · souryourer