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Grammar seems alright for a translation fic, character is too op, you literally wrote yourself into a corner with that nonsense. He has literally all the power in the world, multiverse level, and yet he’s ALMOST following the canon path. He saves Kota’s parents, helps out midoriya by making him smarter, which is fine, but what is the point when you are essentially a god? From the beginning you could’ve already destroyed the villains yourself and changed everything the way you wanted. You talk about changing society’s way but do nothing about it, also your character for some reason likes to act indifferent and edgy to the other characters for no reason, and then you have him killing the villains that pop up at his house. Then you make a clone to portray the role of a villain with no explanation, there’s so many plot holes stacked up on top of each other, it blows my mind. There are villains that have apparently attacked mc several times and they all die, but you have him nerf himself in the fight with muscular for what???? TLDR: Annoyingly OP, still mostly follows canon when the character can literally one shot everything from the beginning. No context in regards to the story progression and ZERO character development, also babysits midoriya for some reason? Nothing makes sense when your character is a multiverse level threat, so anything you write is already obsolete.

Nah it’s webnovel, 90% of these fics are usually abysmally average, if not outright terrible. I like to read for fun in my past time, but I also don’t like wasting it on substandard stories. Here’s some great authors for ex: Nimthewriter, Eyredragneel, Ghost_84, Eren_fraser, Zanarkand_kido, Teemvizzle, Lordofcactus, Themadlad

I appreciate the sacrifice my guy 🫡

Read to Ch.12. Seems like a half-crack fic, grammar is barely decent. Lots of plot holes, story is just everywhere, communication between characters is very underwhelming, it’s like reading a statement from robots. There’s no depth to this fic, but if you’re a casual reader I guess it’s fine for you.

Mc has zero personality, even with “essences” author can’t explain very well what the difference is between a robot and what the ability entails. Mc has no description, no ambition of any sorts, grammar is okay. Author will randomly have people interact with mc with no explanation and then just ignore them as if they disappeared, unless it’s convenient to the plot. World building is lacking, author only gives short descriptions of the places mc is at, it’s like you’re just skipping scenes to get it over with. Overall is just meh, underwhelming, only recommend for casual readers that wouldn’t care about these things.

You smoking that reggy boy, this fic is like a 5/10 lmao

The op literally said he enjoys genres like this if it’s done well and isn’t bland, learn how to read dumbass

Needs a lot of work. Grammar is barely acceptable, author says no system but gives his character wishes, story is confusing because it’s written like bland statements every sentence, and author doesn’t try to explain anything, things just happen and then mc moves on to the next thing. All characters are just bland npcs, robots

It feels like the author tried to make the chapters longer just by repeating words in a different way. This story is supposed to be about the mc, but instead it’s an info dump about the GOT world progressing through the years with tiny changes. All of this is just written in past tense with only small flashes of first person pov, this story has no substance. Grammatically, author is only decent with mistakes here and there. So basically, you’re writing statements of what happened and not actually telling a story.

Does anyone know if it gets better after ch.2? My god it’s so edgy, with no explanation of the mc’s story and why he’s like this, he’s supposed to be transmigrated too right? So explain this shit author, jesus man.

Yeah this CN is ass, idk what these ppl talking bout saying it’s great. They prolly never even read an actual decent story before, so sad.

Just your usual cringe crack fic, the only thing that’s decent is the grammar.