I totally understand that the writer's first language isn't English, but even with an editor helping, starting at chapter 36, there are a ton of errors that are very confusing. I end up skimming entire paragraphs to just get the outline of things. I do like the uniqueness of the world and can tell it's very thought out. I'm only about 45 chapters in and the main character isn't super interesting, but I expect he develops more because of his future plans. It's a decent novel but needs more attention to detail with the actual writing because it creates confusion.
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ch 908 908. Polite
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The writer's first language isn't English so there are some mistakes and odd phrasings, but nothing that leaves any confusion with the reader. However, that is the only issue I've had with this book. The MC is well developed, original, and intelligent. The world building and story are detailed and thorough. To be honest, this book is only one of two I keep in my library and read religiously.
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I totally understand that the writer's first language isn't English, but even with an editor helping, starting at chapter 36, there are a ton of errors that are very confusing. I end up skimming entire paragraphs to just get the outline of things. I do like the uniqueness of the world and can tell it's very thought out. I'm only about 45 chapters in and the main character isn't super interesting, but I expect he develops more because of his future plans. It's a decent novel but needs more attention to detail with the actual writing because it creates confusion.
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Fantasy · AnWan