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That is true; I must've been drunk at that time.

I dropped after reading a few more chaps, what's the point of this fic? this is literally all copy past and just change mc and there u go, I felt I was reading the original all over again. Writing quality-4/5 Stability of updates - 5/5 Story Development- 1/5 Character Design- 1/5 World background- 1/5 Total score- 2.4

thx bro, i will check it

the only reason I am even giving this grade is that people on this website seem to review it so that it can just have a high grade and the reason for that is " the first wmw ff" which is not true, if you do some research you can find some out there before this one. sooo yea... my grades would be: writing: 3, because it has improved writing along with the chapters and that's the most important. stability of updates: 5 because there is always a chapter almost every day so this is a good point. Story development: 2, copy-paste... Character Design; 2, no changes... World background: 2, is taken from the original so... so these are my grade with an average of 2.8 almost 3, strong points: updates every day, author improving his writing skills. weak points: stolen story development, no character design, and previously set world background. I am dropping the fic because I feel like I'm reading the original all over again, but you can do whatever you want after reading this review, just my opinion. but if you just don't care about it then ignore this review. I guess that even the original author was called the plagiarist so I won't talk much of him. This fanfic is copypaste with a few minor changes, that's all that I can say. nothing much to say that could improve the story, maybe original arcs when the story progresses? I think it wouldn't be that bad to try something different, but it will be hard now from the point of the story is now. I tried to be fair and not give a rate less than 1 because that's the same as no effort, which I would disagree, I think some of the critics would agree with me but most are just dropping due to bicky's stuff, which I also found it quite weird. If you find that I have been unfair in my review please feel free to express your opinion in the comments. just wish the author the best.

I read the fanfic until the orochimaru part so I had to drop it, I don't know why you would help orochimaru of all people, you can achieve everything orochimaru has done his entire life in a few years, he literally has an A.I to assist his experiments, but anyway, it was a good read just until that part to ruin for me.

AY YO, U DOING SOLO LEVELING WITH DOUBLE REINCARNATION ???? AYAYAYAYAYAAY THIS ABOUT TO BE SOME EPIC SHIT BRUH CAN'T WAIT FOR THIS, LETS GOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Writing Quality: 5 - Nice Stability of Updates: 3 - welp... Idk what happened to this story but hasn't been updated for a long time... Story Development: 4 - Reincarnation as tradition 😂 BUT this one is peculiar, a sinful guy dies and meets devil and he literally makes a pact with him so he can have a second life, its a good approach to the story, what threw me off was the tail thing... but thats ok for now, there is not much story yet so i await for ur return. Character Design: 3- no comments here... World Background : 3 -no comments here... total score: 3.6 All in all, I do appreciated the approaches u have when doing ur thing, I would love to see u doing a dbz fanfic or a more strategic one like code geass, attack on titan, or even fairy tail ! but please don't drop this novel, or at least open a patreon or a group on discord were we can discuss and share ideas to improve the fanfics ! thanks for showing ur work !

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This review may change as I continue to read the chapters, I hope that you get this and improve your material to the best of your abilities. Grammar is bad, there are mistake that change the whole meaning of a sentence, also some bad word selection, the sentences either have additional words or is missing something, of course i don't expect something amazing in wn, but this is definitely a bad side regardless ( maybe english isn’t your first language, neither mine, but there is a lot of apps to correct your mistakes, please do make use of them). I read the first chapters and I felt kinda boring and cringe at the same time, a lot of unnecessary scenes... details that could be skipped, not much invested in design, but the actions are very detailed, but still, it didn't reveal anything important to the readers in my opinion. I am fine with mc liking children and all that, there are contracted assassins with morals in real life as well, but what is his reason for liking children that much (if it is in the fanfic then ignore this point) ? I'm not gonna judge u about the beggars because that's irrelevant to the story, but the fanfic seems to portray that is common for beggars to make part of gangs, which is totally possible, but that's not common my man; Giving 1000$ to a girl is silly as well, even if he was following her, assuming that she "might" participate in a gang is irresponsible action.

This story has a good potential, I like the idea of putting a monster instead of being human, it has a lot of potential and I could see that the writing quality was improving since chapter 1, which is good, because I was a bit troubled with the text walls, but u did improve it, don't drop this, I will give you another review highlighting specific points in the story and ways to improve it.

same 🤣 i forgot that in my review

Also, My review may change in the future.

Correction to my review: "World background" when I said same as the character Design I meant that I don't have anything to add or complain.

Writing Quality 4/5 : The Idea is pretty good for me and I alway feel very pleased with the way the mc thinks and acts towards this new world(Ps: I really don't check on grammar because I am a pretty fast reader, so I am not gonna add that to my review). He pointed out factors to which every mc should take into account: Wealth, Status and Strength. He is building his strength by hiring competent teachers to achieve his goals, this shows hard work of mc's part and wise decision, even though he got the wishes he doesn't neglect training. Also, I must say that the tournament was very good, keep it up ! Status: Of course, being one of the young master of a large family it already gives him status, but he truly doesn't control anything in his family yet due to his rivalry with his brother, I like how he plots against his brother to get the upper hand on the run to the patriarch seat. Meanwhile, he is always building healthy relationships to help him throughout his path. Wealth: he already has good wealth from the previous reason, but is not enough to keep up with monsters like nie li, so the idea of creating a business is pretty good. Stability of Updates 3/5: I must say... I wished I had more of this because is hard to find a good novel like yours, if you could improve more on the updates it will be amazing. Story Development 4/5: Well, I am not quite sure of the mc's goals, but there are quite a lot of obstacles regardless, since nie li will be marking the mc and his family to destroy them. Though cannon hasn't started, this is your mc's story, never forget that. Political affair and challenges mc needs to face in order to get power in the family is pretty good plot, though I can't see the big picture of mc's future or what will he do after he obtains the patriarch seat. Character Design 3/5: I mean... Is just the original's character design so... I don't have any real comments or complaints here. World Background 3/5: same reason for character design ... All in all this novel has a promising story to which I fully believe in the authors ability, If you could improve the updates it would be great, like I said, I don't care about the wishes or whatever, but I certainly do care on how he will use them. Always plan wisely each chapter and look in the future of your novel. Final Note to the author: Always give plausible reasons to the plot or supposed "mistakes" the mc makes, because that makes the story more healthy for readers. Thank you.