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3yr

Posted

I absolutely loved this. Kind of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. The story line was absolutely incredible. I couldn't have asked for a better read.

The Werewolf's mate

General · FailedMission

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3yr

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Try using synonyms of words instead of repeating the same one's over and over. What I've read so far is great! I love the plot and can't wait to finish

Ferron calmly walked out, putting on an uncaring face as he walked to his room, unlocked the door and went in, closing the door behind him. A few seconds after closing the door whispers broke out as to who the newcomer was. Few brave souls walked up and knocked at the door adjacent to his, the girl who was looking through the peephole of her door jumped back and steadied her breathing before opening the door with an angry expression on her face.

The Grim Reapers Apprentice

Fantasy · TheBlueWaterBottle

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3yr

Commented

The attention to the difference in skill is good, but what about the difference in size and speed?

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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

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3yr

Posted

I absolutely enjoyed these three chapters and I am completely invested in finishing this story. I can't wait for more chapters. You are an amazing writer and I really didn't want to stop reading.