I'm smart unlike books about fantasy
great writing no noticeable errors but the story is boring the mc is edgy and selfish which could be fun but he is a hypocrite and the only character we even get to have more than 1 dimensional thought processes everyone but the mc is practically trash and it’s just him being a narcissist and a hypocrite the whole time which can still make an awesome story if there was any character of some importance beside the mc but there isn’t they all don’t matter except maybe the realm lord and still no development or depth to anything
Fantasy · DMadLord
bro no need for romance in a dragon ball fanfiction in dragon ball there is barely romance so why did you mention romance
Anime & Comics · Meralman
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great writing no noticeable errors but the story is boring the mc is edgy and selfish which could be fun but he is a hypocrite and the only character we even get to have more than 1 dimensional thought processes everyone but the mc is practically trash and it’s just him being a narcissist and a hypocrite the whole time which can still make an awesome story if there was any character of some importance beside the mc but there isn’t they all don’t matter except maybe the realm lord and still no development or depth to anything
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
Fantasy · DMadLord