Badges 10
Moments 13
it was good
ch 37 Last Dinner Guest
In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine
Video Games · ElJonson
ok I just looked it up and yea your right
ch 0 7 The Battle of Rodenius Sea (2)
Summoning America
Book&Literature · DrDoritosMD
nice chapter a little short but it's better than nothing good over all I like how the fights played out and the you detail things isn't long and annoying but short and to the point I like that alit keep it up man and good luck can't wait to read more
ch 0 8 Humans vs Faunus (8)
Sharingan in RWBY (Paused)
Anime & Comics · WutDelusional
good block so far
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Aizen The False God in RWBY
Anime & Comics · DiceyZimmer
nice first chapter good world building and character interdiction keep it up would yea
ch 0 1 The Transference
Summoning America
Book&Literature · DrDoritosMD
no he has hyper regenerative ability that makes me immune to most diseases
ch 18 Chapter 18
The Eager Dimension Hopper (SCP)
Book&Literature · Huurdle
nice chapter I like the story telling and the descriptions.
ch 18 Chapter Eighteen
The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy
Fantasy · Unholy_Student
the pacing is nice and slow and great chapter
ch 17 Chapter Seventeen
The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy
Fantasy · Unholy_Student
nice work a little speedy but I like it
ch 16 Chapter Sixteen
The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy
Fantasy · Unholy_Student
if you did restart your book I would like it if you hade the mc just have force powers but I do like the reward system you made the mc have it's nice as it make sense for the book and tells me lore about starwars I didn't know about but as of now I still like your book as it is
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The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy
Fantasy · Unholy_Student
nice
ch 25 Doomslayer (2)
Summoning America
Book&Literature · DrDoritosMD