Obligatory 5-star review. Excited to start a new novel that's entirely different from my old one. I'll still continue the old one, just in the process of rewriting it.
I'm not sure if it'll count as romance. I already know the outline for the story and it'll be so far ahead instead of right now. Even if there is interaction it won't be forced and sudden.
Thanks for the review :) Yes the start is slow because I wanted to explain a lot of things and didn't want it to sound rushed. If not readers will forget a lot of details.
Hi thanks for the review :) I will try to upload 2 chapters a day as that will allow the plot to progress quickly and at least people will read it. But once it reaches a certain point it will go back to 1 chapter daily uploads since I want to stack the chapters and be able to re-edit it before publishing.
Shameless Review :D This is my first book and there might be mistakes (which I try my best for it to not appear). The story might start off slow, but I wanted to take into account the actions of everyone(or every entity/organization) around him (protagonist). One chapter took me a lot of rewrites to get it logical. I also didn't want to info dump as that's just going to make you forget a lot of things.
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original The Inevitable End
WARNING: This novel is in the process of a rewrite as the early chapters are rough and the later chapters are too slow with the progress. This was my first attempt at a novel and it sucked but I didn't want to throw this aside as I knew the outline all the way until the ending. The rewrite will basically be one year (in the timeline) later where there's more action. Ryan Carter, a 26-year-old man, finds his ordinary life disrupted when a mysterious white rift appears in the sky over his city. As the world reacts to this strange phenomenon, Ryan is swept up into the unfolding events, which will drastically change the course of his life. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ What this novel is about: This novel is a more realistic take or my attempt at it on what happens when a modern world gets hit by gates, magic, mana, etc. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ What to expect: This novel will be very long, there will be a few slice of life elements but not the point where it becomes a slog. Currently, at chapter 35, the novel is making way for why Ryan's reason to becoming stronger. I don't want to have a MC who suddenly wants to gain power without any solid reasoning. There will be no harem. The word count for this novel will be above 1 million words. It might seem like there's too little chapters but most of my chapters are 2k words minimum. I'm currently at 2400 words per chapter average. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ New chapters are released daily at 6:00 PM UTC+8. Discord Server https://discord.gg/s4aqGJgSef46 Chs 83 Collections
Lol it's supposed to be Borrowed Time, but that title was already taken.
The Inevitable End
Fantasy · Fias_M