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Sun rose with its burning heat on Jola island as people started moving from place to place doing their jobs to make Jola into a proper kingdom while their King slowly opened his eyes on his bed.

Speed-run Civilization

Fantasy · KN_Aditya

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Carriage*

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Speed-run Civilization

Fantasy · KN_Aditya

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I like the world and the story so far the premise behind it is very intriguing as well as I always love a good kingdom builder. My only problem of course being the grammar and spelling like hell I’d do it for free just so I can enjoy this without causing my brain to try and decipher what words were put down.

Speed-run Civilization

Fantasy · KN_Aditya

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Trial*

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The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

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2yr

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Isn’t a weak to strong story without orphan hate

"Why are you both wasting so much breath on him?" Alexander said to his buddies, and he then looked at Elliot before speaking with ill intent, "Orphaned bastard, you better drop out of the race before the thirtieth lap. Otherwise, a world of pain is waiting for you."

Awakened: Evolving to Godhood

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

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2yr

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I just really think its good compared to other novels with good grammar spelling and great story telling. Overall nothing to complain about I would suggest to read it.

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

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