I don’ t think the king finding out about his book and inheritance is bad. But the build of it was bad. If you show in a few chapters before the mc focus on his cultivation and the kings suspicion of the mc growth it would be good.
ch 81 Unwilling Reveal
Fantasy · SpicyDaoist
That’ s why he used drone’ s
- The 44 th president of United States, Barrack Obama
History · SaberFate
thanks for the chapter
ch 28 Refining for the Kingdom
Fantasy · SpicyDaoist
Thanks for the chapter
ch 23 Breakthrough
Fantasy · RavenMaster
Dont drop this
ch 0 1 Magus Of Space and Time
Book&Literature · Filip_Atanasovski
Thomas Edison is that you
Walking inside the door, I noticed something extremely unusual, It seems like even when it was bright day outside, My house was very dark inside, to the point I can't even see where the walls are.
Anime & Comics · Ara_Ara_100
I have know idea what is going on but i wanna know more. Good job arthur
ch 0 6 A Strange Kid
Fantasy · Disgrace
How many chapters are you going to make this story
ch 35 Breakthrough
Fantasy · Peppercorn
Oh and the lengt of the fight scene is good, Because everything in the fight scene was needed to win
ch 18 A Worthy Opponent
Fantasy · Peppercorn
What a good first chapter
ch 0 1 Chapter 0001 〚Good and Evil〛
Urban · RavineAbyss
I am looking for a novel similair to this any recommendation?
ch 44 44 Relative
History · MedTryglaw
thanks for the chapter
ch 20 20 Amber Blood
History · MedTryglaw
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ch 0 3 Shatter!
Seeking The Heavenly Way
Fantasy · Dotencsure