Charles_Warriors - Profile

Honestly, I have no problems with the MC killing powerful villains (Darkside, Brainiac among others) but it really bothers me like many but they criticize Batman for not killing his villains, he complies with capturing them, he does not kill them because it goes against his beliefs, it is respectable but So let some judge or someone from the government put the death penalty on dangerous villains. In conclusion, many DC fanfic MCs like to criticize Batman for his policy of not killing when in the world of DC the death penalty exists but never. they give them to the villains

Can you send the link to the original novel?

I have liked the story so far, the only thing that is bothering me is that the mc is becoming a dispenser of jutsus and all kinds of techniques for people outside of his clan (seriously, showing his style of kensutsu to Yugao is going a bit overboard )

you are doing the translation of the original novel (Hogwarts: Starting from Creating the Lord of the Rings). or are you making changes?

I find this story incredible but these last 3 chapters were cliche after cliche, he meets Hermione on the train, I'm not saying it's impossible but seriously that train is huge and the probability of meeting someone relevant from the canon is small and the situation it gets even more unlikely when cho chang is introduced pirnso there were better ways to present the possible love interests, except for the above i like the story

So in Ninja War 4 (if it happens in your fanfic) Madara won't appear? Otherwise, the moment Kaguya appears, Naruto will carry the entire team 7 as a backpack, if due to some plot twist they do not fall into the infinite tsukuyomi

option 4 mc without morals and ethics, wants to transfer the madness of the crown to another person, like the winter king did in fionna and cake This wish creates a new villain who will seek revenge against the MC and will be powerful.

I honestly wouldn't mind the Mac nerf if you had put him in from the beginning of the story when he just made the wishes, now we have a MC with the possibility of going crazy with guilt when he hurts someone in his ice king mode, really already I imagine you do that story arc

In a battle the rival has to give everything, the MC is practically disrespecting his rivals "I will not use haki to make it a fair fight" How do you think his rivals would take that news? They can only defeat the MC because he does not take battles seriously, it is necessary for his teachers to kick his butt to make him stop that type of thinking

Could the mc ask the system for the recipe to make pokeball with apricorn?

shield and hydra hid that howard and his wife were murdered and now the mc mentions it without caring that there are several soldiers around him and maybe one or another undercover agent of hydra or shield, in the best of cases nick fury appears before the mc to question it in the worst case scenario they send the winter soldier

Could the mc create a technique similar to the Annihilation Maker? create creatures with its shadow and only limited by the imagination and cursed energy of its user.

It is true that there are some comics where Barbara Gordon is not a batgirl, but at least she has a relationship with the batfamily so the mc has been very careless with respect to Barbara

Could you give the mc the tony stark template so he's not so obsessed with alex? Because it seems that this whole plot of looking for a relationship with Alex when they are barely 13 years old is to prevent her from kissing another boy, author is it okay that you like Alex's character but that he has liked her since she was 13? I would understand if they were 15 or 16, that leaves a lot to think about with respect to the mc, maybe in his past life he was a rehabilitated ********* who got out of prison