wow this was such an entertaining read then it just stopped. well I hope the author will eventually pick it back up.
ch 117 Extermination March
Sci-fi · HellionPrime
sorry but with his personality he would have killed her before allowing her to leave with that info.
This book has been deleted.
its been an awesome fic so far.
ch 79 CH. 77
Anime & Comics · Yay_Pepto
Ultimately it comes down to do you as the author feel there is justification and need for adding more women into the MC's love life? With his domain and skills it does leave room for additional interest as long as Olivia can accept and the dynamic does not shift too far.
ch 112 In-Between 5
Anime & Comics · ExoticSenta
Not necessarily just way too unfocused for my personal reading.
ch 23 CHAPTER 22: Elogian
Fantasy · CarltheCreator
hope you heal up and use a 1/8 inch dowel rod to scratch your hand, its small 3nough to fit and strong enough to not break.
ch 40 The ladies start Learning the techniques
Fantasy · LittleBastard879
I enjoy they direction you have taken the plot line, keep up the amazing work!
ch 32 Plans for an Uprising against Zeus.
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
Well by your logic then there is no way that bell, with no training could have ever beaten the minotaur or the other high level adventurers he did. so by that logic I have lost all interest in this fiction.
ch 13 Not So Honored Situation 2
Anime & Comics · HolierThanThou515
from a great story to forced plot garbage. seriously whats the point of time turners when you just slap in the time police from DBZ I mean what trash and forced reset to Canon. went from a great read to completely disappointing.
ch 140 Astral Form
Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
I really find it poorly thought out having children do this jazz, worse is forcing canon, if you want to stick to canon so bad then don't try to op your mc at 4 and 5 years old that makes for a lame plot line.
ch 13 Chapter 12: Defeating All for One
Anime & Comics · Geraint124x
well it seems that there's going to be a betrayal, and then a separation i really don't understand why all these push the point of torturing the mc and forcibly separating the mc and heroine. of course I could be seeing it wrong from here but that feels like this is the direction its headed.
ch 282 Just What Is Nero Scheming Now?
Fantasy · Elyon
I see no real point in jumping back n forth, so far the story was good but having the king directly ignore the kingdom spirit should have brought direct immediate retaliation. and to pay to open more chapters when they keep bouncing has lost my interest.
ch 64 Prisoner
Games · Galanar
so he went from looking for his girl to hiding? so far the Mc goes from driven to undecided and cowardly.
ch 21 21. The supermarket (3): A treasure trove
Vampire God in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Dexter_Sled_1111