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Nice chapter, entertaining to see the wackos come out and give their theories! Though I hope he still writes the Heroes of Olympus sequel series. I honestly thought it was better all around than the original series, and I loved the original five books. Maybe he can wait a while, then announce he is writing those to capitalize on nostalgia.

I have to admit that I am disappointed that he hasn’t tried to teach Duy any of the Rokushiki. As a taijutsu master he would most likely be able to learn them quickly, and would offer him a massive advantage in the coming war. Just seems selfish to use him for training but still hold back on something like that. With Haki and the Pika-Pika, it’s not like he would be giving up his only advantage either.

This was a very amusing chapter. Thanks for the update!

Gasp! Another cliffhanger! WHO would have thought?

You got a real cliffhanger problem, you know that? After the like fourth one they start losing their effect. I’m not eagerly awaiting the next chapter to find out what happens anymore, I’m rolling my eyes in frustrating, wondering why I even bother reading every new chapter when I know nothing of importance will happen. Like this one, an entire chapter wasted on empty set up, and you end it before we get to the real events.

Meh, if you were going to do The Hangover, he should have done it as an actual movie he made. All you did was take all the humor out of one of the funniest movies of all time, and use the scenario as a half chapter subplot that felt out of place. Kind of disappointing.

Compared to Lee, who at the age of 12 had weights on his arms and legs so heavy that it shook the ground of an entire standing when he took them off…50kg on every limb every second of every day isn’t even a warm up.

Honestly? He’s gotta be real careful about that marketing. Make a shell company studio, and only use stage names for the actors and actresses. Because the backlash of people getting mad that they were lied to could, and would, sink their studio and destroy those peoples careers. That’s what happened with the real Blair Witch Project after all.

You are thinking of college parties my friend, high school parties tend to be age exclusive. You wouldn’t catch a senior dead at a party full of freshman, just like you wouldn’t see seniors inviting any freshman (except for the creepy dudes trying to score with a freshman girl.) So this party being full of freshman actually makes sense. The only thing unrealistic about it was the lack of people smoking (both cigarettes and pot) the lack of people throwing up all over the place, and the fact that no one got busted by the cops (cause some idiot always gets busted after leaving their first freshman party.)

You know, I hand t mentioned it before, but the formatting is off. Any given paragraph should only have one quote. “Like this see.” Said Harry “Yes I see that.” Replied Ron. “Makes it easier to read the quotes because a massive paragraph with six quotes looks like a jumbled mess.” Finished Hermione.

Love the more fair portrayal of Ron. Personally, Ron Bashing is one of the major reasons I have mostly given up on HP fanfiction lately, so it’s nice to see a story that takes a more fair approach to the guy.

That is entirely fanon. Not a single bit of that is based on canon.

So everything that Harry does or does not do is Dumbledore’s fault?

Dumbledore has the Invisibility Cloak right now so he KNOWS that it isn’t a MOD being declared.