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JewelQueen_001

JewelQueen_001

female LV 15

I love to read books, and that's why I'm here. I never have much to say, but when I do I don't cater to popularity. Even though I hate drama, I need to be honest in my opinion to let others improve.

2020-05-13 Joined United States

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JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
Commented

I really like this Major Payne character:)

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"I don't know if I want to kiss the General for training such talents or kick him for not training the rest." Major Payne snarls.

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku

JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
Commented

famous last words...

Before Snow Dew replies anything, Flame Emperor pointed at Williard and said, "You, come with us. Since you are the weakest here, stick with us." As Williard silently walked towards their side much to the envy of other people since he doesn't even have to lift a finger and get free EXP with two strongest players around, meanwhile, Flame Emperor thought, "as if I would get my daughter get close to that prick. This ordinary, silent and a weak guy is better."

War Online

War Online

Games · Snowstar

JewelQueen_001
Replied to kinggaming

I agree. If anything, it should cost a bit of stamina at most

Flying (level 1): You can travel from place to place with the help of your wings, Costs 10MP per minute;

War Online

War Online

Games · Snowstar

JewelQueen_001
Posted

Positive: 1. Love Rewind/Reincarnation plots, this one has a system plot added which I also like. 2. Chapters are not 3 pages, so I get more and who doesn't love more? 3. MC isn't a pushover or total jerk. He's courageous, smart, team player, and family man. Negative: 1. You don't know where the MC is located in the world, until many chapters in, which is confusing. The world building is practically non-existent. All you know is that humanity is being invaded, it adds mystery sure. But the intro to a plot needs to be captivating, not generic and vague. Coming into a genre that is heavily competitive, this intro had very little NEW. 2. The intro had too many plot holes, I want to ask this: If you watched the world destroyed and had the chance to go back in time to save your loved ones...would you use the little time you had to go to college? delegate preparations with little hands on? tell your friend and a technical stranger before your 'beloved parents,' what's going on? sleep?(that last one is based on realistic PTSD, anyone who has seen real death much less millions die in front of them would not sleep well) 3. The swearing is too much. Every other word out of anyone's mouth is the F word. As a reader, I see swear words as filler words such as 'like,' 'um,' 'uh.' Your word count is amazing, but I feel cheated. Again, this is a readers viewpoint. Most people who swear this much in a novel, are writing how they speak. But it really detracts from the plot. Granted some situations could realistically need a swear word, just not that much.

JewelQueen_001
Replied to JewelQueen_001

aka: Goku

"This… feels like the sphere[1] that a ninja anime's main character used. But this one of mine has strong lighting effects."

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

Sci-fi · 8k Dollar

JewelQueen_001
Commented

oh, I must be old, I first thought of Kakarot

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"This… feels like the sphere[1] that a ninja anime's main character used. But this one of mine has strong lighting effects."

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

Sci-fi · 8k Dollar

JewelQueen_001
Commented

you mean timeline?

It took Arthur nearly three hours to finish making the pipeline he would be following.

VRMMORPG: Dragomancer Reborn

VRMMORPG: Dragomancer Reborn

Games · Grand_Void_Daoist

JewelQueen_001
Replied to BookCat

Amen, glad someone said it!

So, through Le Yan's words, the matter of breaking off the engagement was spread.

I Transmigrated into a Book and Became the Real Rich Daughter's Pampered Cousin

I Transmigrated into a Book and Became the Real Rich Daughter's Pampered Cousin

General · Please Give Buff

JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
Commented

so hot he on fire....got it

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Many girls gave him lustful looks, making Lu Yu feel a little awkward. His well-defined chest muscles and abs were much more defined than the others.

Awakening The Weakest Talent: Only I Level Up

Awakening The Weakest Talent: Only I Level Up

Urban · Solo Leveling

JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
Replied to CipherPolZERO

As an INTJ personality....I agree^_^ ...I have a best friend because she is also INTJ...

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"Don't ask questions you shouldn't ask. I won't tell you even if you ask. Come on, use your connections to make a bet on my win. Remember, keep low-key. If I don't make enough money, I'll kill you."

Starting With A Space Battleship

Starting With A Space Battleship

Games · Silence Doesn't Mean Low-Key

JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
JewelQueen_001
Commented

Dolly, you speak to my Dragon Soul!

"Then what are we waiting for? Let's check out the treasures right away! We can't afford to waste our time!" and without waiting for me, she darted straight into the whack-an-ore mini-game room.

Versatile: Alternate World

Versatile: Alternate World

Games · Kyosei

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