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Horrible comedy (if you can even call it that). It always starts with the annoying system making random remarks and deducting points to where the Mc responds with random "funny" gibberish. It'd always end in a "YES SYSTEM-SAMA" or something similar. It's unbearable. DO NOT RECOMMEND READING! READ AT OWN RISK!

Mushoku Tensei is my favorite story of all time. What makes it so beautiful is that the main character, Rudeus, isn't perfect and has his own set of flaws. The problem in this story is that Gilgamesh is pretty much a perfect being. He is already strong, looks good, and is a prince. There is no development to obtaining his strength other than him suddenly becoming strong. There is no real danger, as he has the Gate of Babylon with him. I may only be on Chapter 12 and be a bit hasty with this judgment but I suspect that he will only show off his powers and take the original main cast to become his harem. I'd be fine with this in any other fanfic but the original writing of Mushoku Tensei just has my expectations set very highly in terms of how well characters are written.

Not really that good in my opinion. The main character changes his attitude towards Night Raid in a matter of seconds and Akame becomes very benevolent for no reason. The interactions feel awkward and forced like they instantly get along after a big fight with each other. Not trying to be rude but the part when Lubb asks Raizo about his girlfriend and he starts getting all sad is a bit cringe. Especially when Akame instantly catches on and feels bad for him. The last thing that I don't like about this is that rape is thrown around everywhere casually. Like every bad guy scene has some random guy raping some other dudes wife and kids in front of them. I get that it sets a dark setting for the story but it just leaves a horrible taste in my mouth. But then again, just my opinion. If you are fine with all this, then continue on to read.

Dude just admit you have an Ntr fetish. No need to hide it so deep. She PROMISES herself to him if he can get strong. No committed relationships coming from her? Bullshit. She believes in freedom but she promises that same freedom to someone else? I guess your so called realistic ain't so good. The fact that you claim there is no Ntr laughable because the moment you made your character promise her love to the mc, she is already a love interest. You keep on saying that she isn't a love interest but I don't believe you. Otherwise why would you add a character from a different anime which is also the cover of the story for an insignificant reason. Don't go saying that she has a bigger role because I know fanfic author don't put effort in their books. Even if a few do, you're not one of them.

Well, is this the real world? Didn't think so.

Thank you for helping me dodge a bullet though just this tiny mention of Ntr irks me a bit.

But I would like one that wouldn't go around sleeping with men like that and, according to the guy, shoves it in his face.

I haven't read it but I agree to the guy. She promises to be his if he gets strong enough, that's setting them up tho right?

I was really confused the whole time I was reading. The mc got raped or he didn't? What is his teigu? Why does his curse not activate sometimes? Maybe I'm just reading this too fast but I'm really confused. I'm usually really good at picking info up even when I'm reading fast but I just can't on this fanfic.