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"Already? It hasn't even been a full day since we told you that we wanted to enrol. What the f*ck." Ria blinked her eyes in surprise as she didn't think Luke was able to arrange it so quickly.

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enroll

"You see, while it is true that the enrolment for the Academy could be considered… Easy in some aspects few have actually managed to enrol using these methods."

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introduction two

"Sorry for the late introductions but as you've probably heard from Ria, I'm Luke Isander. A pleasure to meet you." Luke bowed politely as Alice returned the bow.

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enroll twice

"But as I said, combat is not the only requirement needed for you to enrol freely. There are other tests and in recent years, the difficulty has only increased. If you want to enrol freely right now… It's probably easier for you to study well and get in the normal way."

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enroll

"But as I said, combat is not the only requirement needed for you to enrol freely. There are other tests and in recent years, the difficulty has only increased. If you want to enrol freely right now… It's probably easier for you to study well and get in the normal way."

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enrollment

"Now that we have properly introduced ourselves to one another, I believe we can talk about your enrolment to the Academy. I'm not sure how much this stupid duck has explained to you but she probably said something along the lines of enrolment is rather simple." Luke sighed, glancing towards Ria who felt offended by her nickname.

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it's spelled enroll...

Since they were going to meet Ria's long-time friend, Alice didn't want to look sloppy. Plus, they were going to enrol at the Academy too and according to her old knowledge, first impressions are rather important.

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bunch of world of warcraft cities eh. is she a nelf now?

Much to their surprise, and boredom, they journeyed for an entire week without any mishaps or fights. With their last change of caravans, they arrived at Ashen Port where they would take an airship to their final destination, Silverwind Valley.

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love him

"Let me explain how stupid you are. What you did was essentially find a beast, prepare a trap, lure the beast then decide to dive head first into the trap yourself to test if it worked or not. The most important step in a Ritual is establishing a connection before giving a sacrifice. How do you plan on sacrificing something if there's nothing to sacrifice to? And what power are you planning to even connect with?" Thane lectured as Alice could only sit there and listen with no retort.

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falls into water again

His body had indeed rolled down another steep slope, this one leading to a vast and calm lake… or maybe a sea, or an ocean. Sunny could not see the end of it, so he did not know its size. All he knew was that the water was shrouded in darkness and tranquil, reminding him of the peaceful lightlessness of his own soul.

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early review, ch. 47 critique first: --infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels --sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole why it's good: --mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling. --the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out. --fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai. hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far

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I'm sooo happy you're back!

As I made my way back to the Crimson Ward, my eyes were drawn to the distant city of Blackpool. To my surprise, the once-dull city was now a vibrant spectacle of color and light. The sky was filled with multicolored flames that danced and flickered, casting a warm glow over the cobblestone streets below. The torches lining the streets were of varying hues, ranging from bright red and orange to deep blues and purples, and their flickering light brought the cobblestones to life.