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good joke

the mc acts like a spoiled brat. the writer is using anime/manga tropes. the system was unique compared to others but was still unnecessary. the ages of characters are incorrect but that is fine since dc has the multiverse and this is just another world. no one acts like they do in the comics. they act like spoiled anime characters.

1- the spelling mistakes were all over and the descriptions were horrible. he used "che" constantly and wrote sighing as if it was something the characters said. 2- the way he did magic was unique in the most part but often made little to no sense. 3- the mc went from smart to bratty and ignorant. and he made other characters have knowledge that surpassed graduates of hogwarts before he even meets them. and even though the mc has newt level knowledge, Hermione is still smarter in class. it is confusing since it portrays him as someone years ahead in knowledge needs help from two kids who shouldn't even be close in the intelligence category. 4- the biggest problem for me was he added another reincarnator in this fic as the mc's rival without any warning. that 100 percent killed this for me, the idea isn't horrible but the execution was. he should have made it known from the beginning. I would recommend this to others if you can get past the inconsistencies and misuses of a great plot.

I was enjoying this until the clones went rouge. I understand the writer's perspective and what he was trying to do. but I dislike the idea of that. if you wish to read it then go ahead but because of that reason I will not give this book a second chance like I would do to others.