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When did she abandon or drive him away she only said she wanted to go to the higher world? Unless you're one of those pathetic incels that's not someone looking down on you but a person who has ambitions of their own nothing wrong with that.

Lin Li could only gaze foolishly at the figure that was gradually walking away from her. This time, she felt that she had made a grave error and had lost something incredibly precious which had previously belonged to her but now it was impossible to get it back.

Shadow Hack

Shadow Hack

Eastern · Great Lord of Cloudland

Jake_Pac
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What enemies? This laying low is way too forced he literally knows nothing of this world.

However, choosing to hide his trait meant that his enemies might not perceive him as a significant threat. While they would still pursue him, their focus would be diverted elsewhere, reducing the immediate danger he and his family faced.

The Most Satisfied Reincarnate

The Most Satisfied Reincarnate

Fantasy · DragonKnov

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maybe left 4 dead

There was another type of Bloater known as Exploders, known for their tendency to explode upon death, releasing a shower of acidic bile that can damage and dissolve anything it comes into contact with.

The Rise Of A Shadowsmith

The Rise Of A Shadowsmith

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

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left 4 dead

Everything from their limbs to their digits was swollen beyond recognition. So much so their eyes were usually obscured behind a swollen and distended forehead, giving it a grotesque and inhuman appearance.

The Rise Of A Shadowsmith

The Rise Of A Shadowsmith

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

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wrote

"Who do you think I am, Leon, stupid asshole? You are worthless to this place. Therefore, you must leave here without your salary due to the fact that you have broken company rules. Now, get away from me; I don't want to see your disgusting face!" Bob concluded his words with a repulsive tone.

VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

Fantasy · Galanteo

Jake_Pac
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this is the most unrealistic conversation I've read in awhile. it sounds like a 12 year old wires this.

"Who do you think I am, Leon, stupid asshole? You are worthless to this place. Therefore, you must leave here without your salary due to the fact that you have broken company rules. Now, get away from me; I don't want to see your disgusting face!" Bob concluded his words with a repulsive tone.

VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

VRMMORPG: Legendary Level Zero

Fantasy · Galanteo

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Jake_Pac
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the author doesn't know what the word flung means he keeps using it instead of jumped.

Raith flung up with a cry of joy. He clenched his hands together and felt his heart quiver as he rejoiced. He didn't know what this class was about. But the fact that he got a class was a surety that his life will change.

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
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flung=jumped

He flung to his feet with the shock of realizing that he fought an asura named Thard-Harl and won.

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
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*lost

Thard-Harl said as he slowly lose consciousness with a smile on his face.

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
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*word

'...I'm not sorry, he killed me several times, why should am I feeling bad, I killed him just once.'

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
Commented

remove the wires should

'...I'm not sorry, he killed me several times, why should am I feeling bad, I killed him just once.'

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
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yet know

It was pure luck, but it wouldn't change the fact that he won. He defeated an asura, he didn't know yet the gravity of this achievement.

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
Commented

*momentarily geez at least reread what you've written to make sure it's right.

Raith's sclera reddened and before long began to bleed, his mouth began to monetarily squirt blood till he had less and less strength to struggle.

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
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jacked=backed

His sudden silence put Raith in a twinkling of confusion. But he jacked away from it as soon as the asura resumed its pursuit.

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Requiem Of A Failed Hero

Urban · RighteousFilth

Jake_Pac
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assess not access

"No, you shouldn't have!" Gianni slapped his palm on the table, then clenched it in a fist. "Your couple of weeks of training don't make you a battlemage, son. You don't know how to access threats if they don't wear their Mage's Mark on their forehead!"

My Blood Mage System

My Blood Mage System

Fantasy · Garessta

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In short, Lu Yi had never been in a romantic relationship in both of his lives, and he had no idea how to pursue a girl.

My Life as a Cultivator in a Game

My Life as a Cultivator in a Game

Eastern · Blue Sky And Heavy Rain

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