It’s a good story truly the pacing is fast but not too fast, if I was to have any complaint is you have this labeled as a system story and so far we’ve seen the system once in over 20 chapters it hasn’t really played a roll in the story. But again every other pacing is good and I understand you’re not trying to focus on the system and more the world which is wonderful I just wish to see the status of his growth a tad more than currently used.
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Fantasy · Agis_Z99
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It’s a good story truly the pacing is fast but not too fast, if I was to have any complaint is you have this labeled as a system story and so far we’ve seen the system once in over 20 chapters it hasn’t really played a roll in the story. But again every other pacing is good and I understand you’re not trying to focus on the system and more the world which is wonderful I just wish to see the status of his growth a tad more than currently used.
ch 24 Danger situation
Genomancer
Fantasy · Agis_Z99