That’s not true past me, Secret Arts only have one move. Aster’s “Secret Arts” are modified versions
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Fantasy · SeventhSong
I agree with past me
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Fantasy · SeventhSong
The fight scene could see some improvements
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Fantasy · SeventhSong
Thanks mate!
Hi Taco I'm hereeeeeeeee I am at the beginning, and it seems to be off to a good start. Main Character kinda cocky though. The names are... interesting but won't judge. Humor brightens up almost everything.
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Cmon I'm tired of talking to myself, say something!!!
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Fantasy · SeventhSong
Cmon guys, no comments? I really could use your help and feedback here!
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Fantasy · SeventhSong
Doesn't seem bad, but it feels like I've seen something similar before. Also the different types of cultivation systems can get abit confusing
dropped dont look
Fantasy · GigaFlop