Author, decide on the character of the hero. He is a murderer who kills ordinary residents who did not harm his comrades or a stupid idiot who is not able to kill Sakumo, who did not help him, but kills his allies in droves. Decide already
ch 193 Chapter 192 Another Day, Another Death
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
You're so "smart." He snatched me with one picture. The hero of this story is a dumb patient, how do canon characters differ from supporting characters? Nothing, but the protagonist does not kill them, although they killed a bunch of his people. He's just a coward.
ch 191 Chapter 190 A Death
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
Commentary not on this chapter, but on the work as a whole. Why is Jirai's character so different in different fanfics? Here I personally want to dismember him and feed him his own organs. The most annoying character
ch 185 Chapter 184 Slaughter
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
Even I can last 50 seconds without oxygen. And the monsters of that world can't? Some kind of nonsense
ch 0 9 Ch 09 - The Beginning
Anime & Comics · Wistful_Sam
How an alcoholic's T-shirt turned into a T-shirt without an arm? Я требую объяснений
ch 11 A wild Zuko appears - E
Anime & Comics · Simple_Russian_Boi
I'm in Hokage: Play as Gojo Satoru at the Start
ch 129 128 Fight (3)
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
Light is weight ... Have you ever been kicked at the speed of light?
ch 40 Disaster
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
Jak to się mówi: "Kazirodztwo to sprawa rodzinna" As the saying goes: "Incest is a family affair"
ch 0 4 Changes x School x Pain
Anime & Comics · WorkingAuthor
You're underestimating us.
ch 74 Capítulo 72: ¿Es ella tan importante para ti?
Anime & Comics · DE_LEON
Chadwick Boseman - who is it?
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Anime & Comics · Dr_Chad
My next comment doesn't make sense, so take it as a joke. "Author, there are actually 54 gender genders in the world. And what you use 2 is the oppression of the other 52" - a fighter for the oppression of cisgender people
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
Anime & Comics · Dr_Chad
As such, I didn't see romance here (if you're talking about romances with the main character) There were only hints, but maybe there is already romance. I quit reading this fan fiction when the protagonist became the head of the village
Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
Anime & Comics · Navy_King