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really? Nurse Joy was your go to? just uggh.

seems a bit odd no mention of working toward hs silver skin even with just a brief thought and no associated compulsion?

this is how you wtite a character..a true weasel of a human yet still enchanting and endearing dragging you along. one can see how folk legends like bonnie and clyde and billy the kid yransformed from cowardly villains to everybody's heroes.

needlessly overly dramatic. He knew his father was facinhmg a leadership crisis and he chose to allow it to oroceed instead of consolidating both his and his parents with some fantasy of surging from the bottom to wiping out all the betrayers. Fkk that, start from the top and step on them as a giant like the bugs they are. uggh I hate soap opera dramatics for no readon

No author in existence is worth 20 coins per chapter. The actual cost of reading a novel would allow you to buy several books outright. Utilizing the sights ability to generate a daily 20% discount and earn FP make the cost of 10-15 coins tolerable. With some sadness and a fair amount of disgust I must abandon your story.

just from an English language structure basis the phrase "charateristics of a Blessed Land" doesn't seem to be the best translation. It signifies that all Blessed Lands have characteristics when I'm fairly you you seem to intend to mean that a rare few have special characteristics. It throws of the narrative flow for the reader. just in my opinion.

dear gods you beat that dead horse to a bloody and ignoble second death over why he didnt bond the Bronze sword early on.

gotta say the second Tribulation was tactical genius

niggling but distracting issues 1. crystal dragon needs to build a palace and strengthen the crab and shrimp army. Their loyalty deserves to be rewarded. 2. what ever happened to helping the principals av dragon with av slimes to help manage the network.

where were all the other OP beasts? the curse crow and destiny spider cumulative DOT's (not even mentioning their individual instakill skills). just seems like synptoms of OP powers snowballing out if hand making it difficult to create believable battle scenes.