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Dont even bother putting this shit here. Read it on another site by chance and almost puked. I am usualy quite tolerant to the chinese nationalism in such novels but this is on totaly other level. General trend in this novel is that only chinese are good and people from other countries like Japan, Korea, USA, India etc. are hatefull, treacherous, have stolen chinese culture, always wanted to destroy China and so on. Later on, the main character kills the leaders of such groups and uses the rest of them as slaves. Pure hate in this novel is similar works like Mein Kampf. The original author should get some psychiatric help and be locked away somewhere safe .... for the rest of his life.

Interesting start. Good thing is that this is no common isekai/system novel like thousands others. But the writing is sadly average at best. Some plotholes are big to swallow an elephant. Many times things are poorly explained and i was like: "Eh? How did the characters got to this situation? Who is this character?"

Like the other works of this author .... great work but it gets killed by the almost nonextistent updates. The endless waiting for new chapters makes me go away to look for something else to read.

Not that this is the greatest Novel, far from it. But i read it anyway when there was nothing to do. BUT! The ending. OH MY GOD. First i was thinking this a a april fools joke. This "ending" of all the plots and substories in one chapter is a brand new low. They say that novel is like the authors child. IN this case its like a woman goin to a abortion clinic to kill her son that is already 20years old.

Your english is really good. (we are not at Oxford to care about some comma on the wrong spot) Compared to english in some other novels on this site .... well i seen some english on this web that look like they were translated by google without any correction and would give cancer to your eyes just by reading it.

Very nice book. In the flood of harem stories out there this is a rare gem. At first i started with this novel just to read about some kinky *** but now i am totally hooked on the story and cant wait to see how it will develop. Great World, good characters (maybe just add some female character that does not end in bed with MC ... it is getting a bit predictable) The only small (or big) minus is too slow updates :)