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Bit late,but I think you should look over comma rules,and also remember that sometimes you fill story gaps in your head,and you need to remember that we might not read it as you do.For example,there are a few run on sentences that you read as if there were commas.You also need to watch out for comma splicing.I know a-lot of this is me talking about commas but it looks better when you add them.