Darrell_Spenst - Profile

I really enjoyed reading the story so far. I think the premise of the story is slightly unique in that a video game slowly influences what happens in the real world. The background and character development is very good. I can't wait to read more chapters of this story.

This is an unique story. There are plenty of stories where the MC gets trapped in a video game, but very few where the video game slowly leaks into the real world. I really enjoyed the story so far, and am exited to read many more chapters in the future.

I really enjoy this story. The plot progresstion flows at a smooth pace, not to fast but not slow either. The characters have been detailed nicely and the MC has an unique character design. I would highly recommend this story to my friends

I really am enjoying reading the story. I do have a couple of complaints. 1st is that the MC takes way too much time whining about getting turned into a girl. Just get over and accept, it's not like you have a choice in the matter. And the 2nd when a character's gender is first established stop changeing that the gender ever other sentence. It might work for chinese liturature, but is confusing and down right annoying in English liturature. Other than that i really enjoy the story, plotline is well thought out, the characters have been nicely flesh out.

I really enjoyed this chapter because the MC has been building himself up to this point since the book began, and he found himself a resident of this world instead of a player