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Hi I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted and you left me wanting more and more ! so when I realize that such masterpiece didn’t have a review I was shocked! So I’m here to show my appreciation to your work ! Please continue with your hard work ! That being said... Writing Quality: it’s pretty good, I didn’t notice any big mistakes in your grammar. For me it was very fluid, I read all 40 chapters in one go and I never felt tired ! I enjoyed reading it and that’s the most important thing for me. Updating Stability: I can't say much about it, so I’ll trust you and give you 5 stars. Please continue to update frequently! Story Development: I say it’s a good rhythm, not so slow but not so fast, until now you pretty much followed the original rhythm of the manga which is good for me. Although I felt like the MC should do more physical training, like sparing with tang or something like that, for what you write it seems that he just do some heavy work out and meditate but that alone doesn’t give him experience on real battle. Until now that wasn’t a problem because he never encountered anyone who was stronger than him in real fight ( I’m not counting the exam to enter Shrek Academy, because if the professor had take it seriously, Joy would lose ). Other than that I notice that the MC try hard to not change the original events, which I can understand, but that can become very boring in the future, until now that’s not a problem because it still just in the beginning of the plot. Overall I’m loving it ! Character Design: I have nothing to say about it, l pretty much see him as Aizen before betraying Soul Society, I didn’t paid too much attention to his description so I can’t say much, I’m sorry ! World Background: I recently started reading Doulou Dalu, I didn’t finished so I can say much. However I thought it was clever the idea of using the infinity stones as material soul ! MCU it’s not my forte, although I watched the movies I was never a die hard fan of the comics. For now that’s all I can give you, I’ll do another review in the future. I hope it was helpful! I’m sorry I can’t give you a more detailed review, I’m usually to shy to Write anything, this is my first review ever T^T Obs: please take in consideration that English it’s not my native language so I apologize for any mistakes