And a tempo is too slow
ch 15 Political Nightmare
Book&Literature · Evoxius
I can’t count how many times I burst out laughing.
ch 10 Chapter 10: The Gryffindor Sword? It's Not Magic At all(EDITED)
Book&Literature · Preet_Dhaliwal_6569
Где я могу найти оригинал?
* I can accept it if the author will end this ff.
It's too slow. How old is your MC? 10-11? And 40 chaps have gone...
ch 37 Chapter 15 (Part 3)
Anime & Comics · amattsu
Temp is too slow...
ch 10 Chapter 5 (Part 2)
Anime & Comics · amattsu
Once again I see these stupid, annoying and not funny jokes in FF. God, bless me with patience.
ch 0 2 chapter 2. waking in valyria(1)
TV · 4dreamer
Obviously this is Cheshire.
ch 0 8 Chapter 08 - Towards 'Braavos' (a fat cat)
TV · babysaya
Overall I have good feelings about this fanfic. But its pace... it's an explosive horror. Amazing descriptions and great vocabulary. Long chaps, which is usually good but not in this case. The descriptions are sometimes too thorough and filled with pointless depictions of unimportant details and unimportant characters. That's why the chaps are so long and the story tempo is too slow. Some may like it, some may not. I'm from the second. If the author had shortened some moments and sped up what was happening, boredom wouldn't have killed me. Bye.
Vast Sea Visualization
Book&Literature · Evoxius