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Edit : "felt fear"
This was the first time he ever felt…fear around his father. He'd refused to believe the man before him was his father.
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun
Ahah ! 😂 If only you knew... 😂😂
"So what if he's Caesar? Do you actually think that he can kill you while I'm alive?" He was physically furious. "Maybe I made a mistake, leaving you in a bubble all through your life that now you can't even be a man. Caesar is just like you! Toughen up just like he has! You can also be on the same level as he is."
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun
It's a little bit incoherent here, Dimitri already gave him this information
"Caesar?" Mr. Petrov asked with a frown. "Caesar was in Italy too?"
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun
That's exactly it. What a keen observant you are 😌😂
Mr. Petrov folded his arms and gave him a serious look. "Since you returned from Italy, you've been this way. Paranoid and afraid, as if someone would jump right out of thin air and take your life."
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun
Maybe you can go and die, then 🤔
It was either him or Caesar. One had to relent, and it wouldn't be him.
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun
Edit with the majuscule at the beginning
"impossible." Mr. Sergey furiously pushed him and got out from under the desk. "Caesar wouldn't mate with a human. The pack won't allow such! Never! He will have to reject her!"
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun
Interesting take 🤔🤔 That sure makes sense for now, well done 👍
Good, Exceptional, Remarkable... Glorious... and so on.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Well said 😂
"You are not an ant, Sunny. You are a cockroach. Remember?"
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I'm still curious how the Nightmare ended up with his experience before being consumed by the molten metal. Also, if the end of a nightmare has to be at the death of the subject, then how could Sunless escape it ? The only explanation I see is that the consciousness of the Sun Prince died then, fortunately...?
"I am not sure that he really knows anything, anymore. He is still alive, somewhere inside, but I don't think he is fully… sentient. At least… at least I hope that he is not…"
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
... For now.
And, of course, there was no colossal iron hand laying in the center of the island, to give it the peculiar name.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
That's the Iron Giant for sure 😅
"If we were to meet the herald here, my beautiful sanctuary might… well... get damaged. That would not do. As to why the island is shaking, I guess we'll see…"
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
That's a beautiful question there. Well written, author 😌
"...I feel like Odysseus, too, sometimes. Lost in a distant land. Only, unlike him, I don't have a home to want to return to. I have nothing to strive for, apart from saving my skin, keeping my friends alive, and maybe living a little bit better than a wild beast. Can someone really be lost, if they don't belong anywhere?"
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Ooowww 🥺
With a sigh, he turned around and walked back to his room. The gloomy shadow followed, trying to not show that it, too, missed its siblings.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Hello author. 😊 I truly love your story but I think it needs some criticism, especially about the writing. The punctuation and phrasing are regularly all over the place. Maybe try to read it aloud for yourself to better spot the problems in the sense and rhythm. I know for sure that your readers will appreciate the better fluidity of your writing 😁 You can do it 💪💪
ch 133 Upsetting and unruly demands
Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival
Urban · fairytail72
Wow what a spoiled brat...
Penny's expression turned vindictive as she snarled, "Fine! Let's see how you escape when I complain to Dad."
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Urban · fairytail72
*as dangerous as he was beautiful
Keon genuinely cared for his sister. Penny was young and naive, she was chasing after Nicolai because she thought that he was different from the rest of the men she had been acquainted with, but Keon knew that Nicolai was as dangerous and as beautiful as he was.
Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival
Urban · fairytail72
Ahah. I like this guy 😁
Zayden snorted. "Anyway, what I want to say is that even if you intend to hit him or punch him, it's not going to change anything. The second you signed the divorce papers, your and your wife's destiny was set. You let her go, and my brother picked her up, now, even if he chews her down and spits her on the ground. It has nothing to do with you."
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Urban · fairytail72
Nicolai :
"You will what? Tell me. I am curious," Nicolai jumped past the table and came to a stop in front of Noah. "You will do what? Kill me? Burn me? Bury me?"
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Urban · fairytail72
Just above there is : Mr Petrov : "So Adeline was in Italy ?" Dimitri : "So was Caesar"
"Caesar?" Mr. Petrov asked with a frown. "Caesar was in Italy too?"
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Fantasy · PeachBunBun